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作者: elusive 时间: 2016-3-28 02:46
标题: 继续问问题，真心求助，大家一起讨论。
As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro.

(A) Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including
(B) Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, trained several generations of actors who include
(C) Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, training several generations of actors whose ranks included
(D) one of the most influential artists in the American theater was Stella Adler, who trained several generations of actors including
(E) one of the most influential artists in the American theater, Stella Adler, trained several generations of actors whose ranks included

答案C
DE很好排除，但是AB为什么错了？C又为什么对了？

我觉得ABC都对啊。。。A里面那个who trained有可能修饰到theater比较牵强，但是在很多情况下是可以的呀。

真心求助

作者: amyw21005 时间: 2016-3-28 03:53
这是16og上的题，我也纠结过很久。我的感觉是
a 选项中的who是多余的，因为前面主句中的主语只有一个就是Stella Adler，train直接修饰主语，加上who反而指代不明

b who include表达尴尬，只能是 Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro之后还有从句或者动作，可以表达为Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro who were....

本人也是语法渣，希望其他大神纠正

作者: 医生吃鱼 时间: 2016-3-28 08:35
这道题竟然是OG16的自测题里的，难怪这么眼熟！

楼上基本都说对了。

A选项错在who定语从句修饰对象有歧义。根据逻辑应该修饰Stella，但是该选项中更可能是修饰 the most influential artists ，导致句意错。

B选项错在include作动词，句意变成 actors include Marlon Brando，翻译不通。

C选项中，逗号+training结构作modifier，修饰Stella，而且与主句was one of the most influential artists的句意相呼应。这个选项看着舒服！

作者: elusive 时间: 2016-3-28 09:37

医生吃鱼发表于 2016-3-28 08:35
这道题竟然是OG16的自测题里的，难怪这么眼熟！

楼上基本都说对了。

A错了我现在知道了，但是BC还是分不清。
我觉得train读起来没问题，问题应该出在generations of actors 上面。

现在搞不清楚：
generations of actors who include为什么错了
generations of actors whose ranks included为什么对了

好像rank是关键。
但是仍然觉得B没有问题。

作者: elusive 时间: 2016-3-28 11:41
再顶一下

作者: elusive 时间: 2016-3-28 14:39
我知道了，B选项里面include时态错了，应该是included

作者: 医生吃鱼 时间: 2016-3-28 17:39

elusive 发表于 2016-3-28 14:39
我知道了，B选项里面include时态错了，应该是included

对的，include的时态问题是绝对错误。

另外我觉得who include这个结构句意也有问题，不如whose ranks include好。
不过一时找不到合适的表达。

作者: elusive 时间: 2016-3-29 00:27

医生吃鱼发表于 2016-3-28 17:39
对的，include的时态问题是绝对错误。

另外我觉得who include这个结构句意也有问题，不如whose ranks in ...

你说得对，
og说who include不能加人名，但是whose ranks include 就可以。

作者: 医生吃鱼 时间: 2016-3-29 00:31

elusive 发表于 2016-3-29 00:27
你说得对，
og说who include不能加人名，但是whose ranks include 就可以。

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