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标题: og16. 138. 指代问题－ Elizabeth Barrett Browning [打印本页]

作者: 白冬冬 时间: 2016-3-22 00:08
标题: og16. 138. 指代问题－ Elizabeth Barrett Browning

og16.

138. Although she was considered among hercontemporaries to be the better poet than her husband, later Elizabeth BarrettBrowning was overshadowed by his success.

(A) Although she was considered among her contemporariesto be the better poet than her husband, later Elizabeth Barrett Browning wasovershadowed by his success.

(B) Although Elizabeth Barrett Browning wasconsidered among her contemporaries as a better poet than herhusband, she was later overshadowed by his success.

(C) Later overshadowed by the success of her husband,Elizabeth Barrett Browning's poetry had been considered among hercontemporaries to be better than that of her husband.

(D) Although Elizabeth Barrett Browning's success waslater overshadowed by that of her husband, among her contemporaries she wasconsidered the better poet.

(E) Elizabeth Barrett Browning's poetry was consideredamong her contemporaries as better than her husband, but her success was laterovershadowed by his.

选D

分析指出：

C，比较对象成了，EBB的poetry因丈夫的success，改变句意。主语是EBB’s poetry, 所以后面的her指代不对。

D，success与success相比简洁明了，EBB被认为是个更好的诗人

问题： similar as C，为何D的 her 没有指代不清的问题？还是说这两个her 的先行词是 she？？

作者: 白冬冬 时间: 2016-3-22 00:24
顶一下～～

作者: elusive 时间: 2016-3-22 01:49
这道题跟her没有关系。这道题的考点是consider：consider的最好用法是consider+n；然后consider to be不算错但是跟前者比不算好；但是consider as一律错。这道题还有一个考点那就是对比。
A：consider to be poet，劣等选项。后面一句应该改为EB’ssuccess was overshadowed by his success。
B:consider as poet，直接错。后面半句错误同A：Hersuccess was later overshadowed by his success。
C:consider to be poet，劣等选项。ElizabethBarrett Brwoning's poetry不能做主语。
D:consider poet，D是最优
E:consider as..直接错。后面半句错误同A，Buther success was later overshadowed by that of his husband。

作者: 医生吃鱼 时间: 2016-3-22 08:31
楼主说得对，C的主要错误是比较对象错。

C中不存在代词错误。
整个句子中只出现一位女性，就是EBB，因此her一定是指代EBB。
EBB出现在介词结构中还是单独出现，都不会引起指代歧义。

代词指代不清不是绝对错误，而代词与指代对象的单数不一致才是！

作者: 白冬冬 时间: 2016-3-22 21:33

医生吃鱼发表于 2016-3-22 08:31
楼主说得对，C的主要错误是比较对象错。

C中不存在代词错误。

没有错，谢谢，支持一下！

“代词指代不清不是绝对错误，而代词与指代对象的单数不一致才是！”

作者: leslie.x 时间: 2016-10-30 11:07
求问，D选项中的she属于指示代词，先行词难道是EBB's这个所有格？

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