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标题: 求助大神：D项为什么redundant？ [打印本页]

作者: lanningxin 时间: 2016-3-18 16:56
标题: 求助大神：D项为什么redundant？

Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solotransatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane,he therefore refused tocarry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.

A. Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solotransatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane,he therefore

B. When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solotransatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on hisplane, he

C. Since he was very reluctant to carry any extraweight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, soCharles Lindbergh

D. Being very reluctantto carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlanticflight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh (E)

E. Very reluctant tohave any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlanticflight, Charles Lindbergh

D项为什么redundant？求助~

作者: elusive 时间: 2016-3-19 09:49
我的思路
A：没错，留着
B：being very reluctant复杂，删除being更好。
C：so和since重复了
D：和B一样，bing重复了。
E：没错。

A vs E，A我觉得太复杂了，E很简洁。

你问的问题：形容词，如果出现 being+形容词和形容词自己，呢么呢肯定是形容词自己更简洁，为什么？因为多了being变得更复杂

作者: alpha0531 时间: 2016-5-4 11:23
redundant在两个地方
1：being在做modifier的时候，是完全可以省略的，例如：being tired from the party, I fell asleep in less than one minute,这里的being是一个modiifer，完全可以不要的，同理本题里就是E选项
2：was the reason也是冗余的。从句意上来看，逗号前部分是一整个modifier，在修饰后面的主句，主句在说 C refused to XXXXX，前半句从句意上来看是在说明refuse的原因，所以没必要再用was the reason了

PS: being 如果是在动名词作主语，是不能省略的。楼主可以参照一下上一版OG的第100题，正确选项：E. Being heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, is likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.

作者: lanningxin 时间: 2016-5-4 19:01

alpha0531 发表于 2016-5-4 11:23
redundant在两个地方
1：being在做modifier的时候，是完全可以省略的，例如：being tired from the party, ...

同意！

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