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作者: fishspa 时间: 2005-7-29 13:16
标题: GWD-8-Q2

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie(The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

A. ......

B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

C. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

E. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

参考答案是D，但是根据以往的ETS答案，好象D并不符合他们的风格，我选B，请各位分析指点

作者: ESeraph 时间: 2005-7-29 15:27

问题应该出在both上，in the stride-piano tradition of BOTH Willie(The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington是正确用法。这样就只有D正确了

作者: fishspa 时间: 2005-7-29 18:33
谢谢！可我还是觉得B比较顺

作者: 三脚猫 时间: 2005-7-29 23:56
那楼主如何解释Ｂ中both的用法：both in A　and B，yet in C,这是显然不对的啊。

作者: phoenixfr 时间: 2008-8-30 14:55
Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk不会有指两个人的嫌疑吗

作者: aeoluseros 时间: 2008-8-30 18:23

B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

B里面同位语里，因为没有前文，我想应该用a jazz pianist and composer更合适...

Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk 这个同位语前面部分相当于称谓，没问题的吧...

作者: ashleyyuan 时间: 2008-11-12 12:30
标题: 回复：（fishspa）GWD-8-Q2

GWD-8-Q2:

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

A. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

C. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

E. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

考點: both與root的用法

本題句中有yet是對等連接詞，所以yet前後應該連接兩個完整的句子。

A、B、E 錯在both的用法，both強調的應該是Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington，而不是修飾root, B、E錯在both用法不應修飾tradition.

C錯在對等連接詞yet的用法錯誤。

補充Longman dictionary對root一字做動詞時的用法

be rooted in something

to have developed from something and be strongly influenced by it:

例句: The country's economic troubles are rooted in a string of global crises.

This feeling of rejection is often deeply rooted in childhood.

根據上述用法，我覺得ACE三個選項，使用主動態的root表達意思不如用被動語態來的清晰

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作者: wellner 时间: 2009-1-5 02:27

thanks!

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作者: nerakuhs 时间: 2009-1-17 15:55

多谢这道题竟然没看出both and前后不对等，选了E。。。。唉

作者: SWXQ 时间: 2009-7-7 23:21

但是随意删掉原句中的both不是不符合GMAC出题习惯么？

作者: 柴柴新天地 时间: 2009-12-3 20:25
关于是否应该改变原意这一点，如果原意本身有误不合乎逻辑，那么当然是要改正过来才对的！

作者: lenovoo 时间: 2010-3-12 11:43
thx

作者: Willyum 时间: 2013-10-31 08:40
题目分析：就是划线内外存在一个both and连接的一个并列关系，根据意思应该是willie和duke这两个人进行并列，可是如果用了both就是willie的传统和duke这个人进行并列了，干掉。B的错误和A类似，C没有这个错误，但是没有谓语，干掉。D没有明显错误，留着。E又加了both，并列的地方不对，干掉。

作者: 大熊希希 时间: 2014-3-20 19:33
thx！！

作者: 小小小小 时间: 2016-5-9 09:40
看一下！

作者: lliliputong 时间: 2016-9-6 11:04

1.关于jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk表达，ron神的解释: this is a special idiom. if you preface someone's name with a noun describing their occupation (or other word describing what that person does), WITHOUT 'A'/'AN', you DO NOT use a comma.名词修饰人时, 没有定冠词, 不要加逗号。
if there's an article, you DO use a comma.
if it's an adjective, you DO use a comma.如果是修饰文章要加逗号, 是形容词修饰, 要加逗号。

example: 这三个例子好好记！
Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk ... --> correct
A jazz pianist and composer, Thelonious Monk ... --> correct
Creative and original, Thelonious Monk ... --> correct
所以这里的jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk表达时正确的

2.这里真的不能用both…and来讲, 因为and后面是duke Ellington,限制了both前面的内容也必须是一个noun, 可both前面是一个介词短语in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith, 所以不能构成平行,只能省略both. 但用and表示并列。
用and并列, 它不是一个enclosed marker, 所以对前面的平行会放宽要求. 直接并列的是in the stride-piano tradition of 1. ［Willie (The Lion) Smith ］and和 2.［Duke Ellington］前面的介词短语被踢到两个名词平行的外面了

3.大的结构是, Thelonious Monk（主语） 1. produced a body of work rooted... 和 2. yet he stood apart...
第二点讲的是第一个句子的内部平行, 可以用both and, 或者and，跟后面的句子没有影响。

作者: 0xFF 时间: 2016-9-6 11:10

lliliputong 发表于 2016-9-6 11:04
1.关于jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk表达，ron神的解释: this is a special idiom. if you p ...

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作者: Grace828 时间: 2016-11-7 11:41

lliliputong 发表于 2016-9-6 11:04
1.关于jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk表达，ron神的解释: this is a special idiom. if you p ...

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