标题: ［求助］曼哈顿语法中关于修饰语的一个问题 [打印本页] 作者: MosenBanana 时间: 2015-12-13 12:44 标题: ［求助］曼哈顿语法中关于修饰语的一个问题 第六条讲解修饰语的时候有三个例句：
Wrong: George Carlin, both shocking and entertaining audiences across the nation. who also struggled publicly with drug abuse, influenced and in- spired a generation of comedians.
Better: Both shocking and entertaining audiences across the nation. George Car- lin. who also struggled publicly with drug abuse, influenced and inspired a generation of comedians.
BEST: Both shocking and entertaining audiences across the nation, George Carlin influenced and inspired a generation of comedians.