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作者: liuyi777 时间: 2005-7-24 14:15
标题: gwd 28-12

28-12: Over the next few years, increasing demands on the laceName>ChattahoocheelaceName> laceType>RiverlaceType>, which flows into the laceName>ApalachicolalaceName> laceType>RiverlaceType>, could alter the saline content of laceName>ApalachicolalaceName> Bay, which would rob the oysters there of their flavor, and to make them decrease in size, less distinctive, and less in demand.

A: which would rob the oysters there of their flavor, and to make them decrease in size

B: and it would rob the oysters there of their flavor, make them smaller

C: and rob the oysters there of their flavor, making them decrease in size

D: robbing the oysters there of their flavor and making them smaller

E: robbing the oysters there of their flavor, and making them decrease in size

我选 c 因为一开始看到 smaller觉得和后面的 less 很陪，但看到有大牛选 c 觉得 c 语法没错，意思好像更好一点。大家帮我看看吧

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作者: yukon 时间: 2005-7-24 15:00

我觉得是D，

A: which （不能指代一句话）would rob the oysters there of their flavor, and to make them decrease in size

B: and（改变了原文结构，也run-on） it would rob the oysters there of their flavor, make them smaller

C: and（改变了原文结构） rob the oysters there of their flavor, making them decrease in size(三个比较级并列）

D: robbing the oysters there of their flavor and making them smaller

E: robbing the oysters there of their flavor, （逗号不必要）and making them decrease in size(三个比较级并列）

作者: yukon 时间: 2005-7-24 15:01

对了，楼主这个GWD-28是从哪得到的啊？

作者: liuyi777 时间: 2005-7-24 15:39

gwd 28 and gwd 31

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=34&ID=118995&replyID=1153845&skin=0

作者: crackpot 时间: 2005-8-4 17:04
D

作者: xinfaxian 时间: 2005-8-4 22:18

支持D,应该是伴随的结果，不是并列关系。

谢谢楼主的连接哦！

作者: applemouse 时间: 2005-9-2 12:38

昨天跟同学讨论这题，他认为是D。我觉得也挺有道理的，我把他的理由粘贴在这里，请大家帮忙看下。NN们快来看看呀！谢谢先！！！

理由如下：

选D

全句的主语是increasing demands，原句的大致意思是：这个demands可以改变Apalachicola湾的含盐量，这会改变牡蛎的味道，并且使得它们… （我没查字典，不知道翻的准不准，不过大致是这个意思）

从句意可以看出，是这个港湾含盐量的改变导致了牡蛎在味道、大小、需求量等方面的变化。这正是D用两个伴随状语所表达的意思。

如果选C，C里的rob和alter并列，making做伴随状语，表rob和alter两者的结果。那么，意思就变成了：不断增长的需求导致了这个港湾含盐量的改变及牡蛎味道的变化，这两种变化导致了牡蛎在大小、需求量等方面的变化。注意红体字部分，其中，含盐量的改变导致牡蛎大小的变化的确有理，但是味道的变化导致牡蛎大小的变化显然不合逻辑，所以C不正确

作者: lymmba 时间: 2005-12-16 17:21

"smaller" in B and D is incorrect since no comparable object. only E, the best choice; "robbing" and "making" modify "alter".

Regarding the comma between "their flavor" and "and making", it's not wrong, you can find many examples in OG

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作者: iruka 时间: 2005-12-16 20:16

以下是引用lymmba在2005-12-16 17:21:00的发言：

"smaller" in B and D is incorrect since no comparable object. only E, the best choice; "robbing" and "making" modify "alter".

Regarding the comma between "their flavor" and "and making", it's not wrong, you can find many examples in OG

So what's the comparable object of the "less distinctive, and less in demand"?

作者: Tono 时间: 2006-1-11 16:32
why not D?

作者: Tono 时间: 2006-1-11 16:41

D:....smaller,less distinctive,and less in demand

E:the decrease (n.) in size,less distinctive,and less in demand------unparallel

Thus ,D is correct

作者: xiangqinzh 时间: 2006-11-1 16:45

选D

从句意可以看出，是这个港湾含盐量的改变导致了牡蛎在味道、大小、需求量等方面的变化。这正是D用两个伴随状语所表达的意思。

如果选C，C里的rob和alter并列，making做伴随状语，表rob和alter两者的结果。那么，意思就变成了：不断增长的需求导致了这个港湾含盐量的改变及牡蛎味道的变化，这两种变化导致了牡蛎在大小、需求量等方面的变化。
注意红体字部分，其中，含盐量的改变导致牡蛎大小的变化的确有理，但是味道的变化导致牡蛎大小的变化显然不合逻辑，所以C不正确

分析的很有道理

作者: hedge 时间: 2006-12-9 12:38
thanks

作者: xiaoniuren 时间: 2009-4-19 12:57

作者: wlcheer 时间: 2009-12-29 11:10
看来做题还是要慢一些

作者: chasedreamho 时间: 2010-2-23 10:57
ding

作者: oo1x1oo 时间: 2010-2-23 12:09
ding D

作者: zhangbutan 时间: 2010-2-23 13:58
应该是选D吧

作者: niclively 时间: 2014-2-13 19:14

applemouse 发表于 2005-9-2 12:38
昨天跟同学讨论这题，他认为是D。我觉得也挺有道理的，我把他的理由粘贴在这里，请大家帮忙看下。NN们快来 ...

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作者: 我只是来学习的 时间: 2016-11-25 10:26
Correct Answer: D
Parallelism; Grammatical construction
The sentence claims that demands for river water may change the saline content of the bay, possibly altering the flavor and size of oysters there and diminishing the oysters’ marketability. The sentence is not parallel. It should read which would rob the oysters . . . and make them decrease to be parallel and grammatical. The series of three phrases after make them that describes what will happen to the oysters also needs to be parallel.

A The referent of the relative pronoun, which, is ambiguous; the two effects of altered saline content are not expressed in parallel form, with a relative clause expressing the first effect, and an infinitive phrase expressing the second.
B The referent of the pronoun it is ambiguous. Also, the effects of the bay’s altered saline content are not expressed in parallel form—the first being an independent clause and the second a verb phrase.
C The comma before the conjunction and signals that an independent clause will follow and, but a verb phrase follows instead. The series of phrases following making them lacks appropriate parallelism.
D Correct. The potential effects on the oysters are expressed by two parallel participial phrases, the second of which lists three adjectives correctly in a series.
E The series of phrases following making them lacks appropriate parallelism.不平行如果and前加逗号则后面需要和making平行的结构，and making·····，making····

作者: ananjj 时间: 2017-8-3 14:05

xiangqinzh 发表于 2006-11-1 16:45
选D 全句的主语是increasing demands，原句的大致意思是：这个demands可以改变Apalachicola湾的含盐量，这 ...

可是这里的making的逻辑注意变成increasing demand on the CR这样理解的话C也不对

作者: KuangrenArs 时间: 2017-10-10 19:43
还是不太明白，making和robbing做伴随状语，主语不应该是demand吗？而不是saline content，反而觉得用which会好一些。

作者: huuuuugo 时间: 2017-10-21 06:28

KuangrenArs 发表于 2017-10-10 19:43
还是不太明白，making和robbing做伴随状语，主语不应该是demand吗？而不是saline content，反而觉得用which ...

所以不能用which啊这里which非限又不能跳跃指代对象

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