标题: 【verbal2016】SC57 and位置问题 [打印本页] 作者: loveflora1229 时间: 2015-10-11 22:01 标题: 【verbal2016】SC57 and位置问题 The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.
(A) conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive fromthese analyses, can decide
(B) conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding
(C) conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, deciding
(D) conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide
(E) conditions and, in their use of the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, they decide
作者: branxu 时间: 2015-10-21 00:05
(D) conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide
这个中间的插入语可以忽略,没有任何问题
The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding
...that executives.......and they这里的they是多余的,前面已经有唯一的主语了,后面也不需要重复,简洁原则