(A) Traveling the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were armed only
(B) In 1905, Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály, traveling the back roads of Hungary, began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were only armed
(C) In 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, traveling the back roads of Hungary armed only
(D) Having traveled the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology; they were only armed(C) (E) Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály, in 1905 began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, traveling the back roads of Hungary, arming themselves only 这里答案给的是C,我真得很困惑。armed怎么也应该修饰前面最近的名词roads啊,虽然说逻辑意思上好像说不过去,但是前面也还有一个poineering work可修饰。那两个人也相隔太远了吧。感到很困惑。 如果一定要我选择一个答案,我选择B. (B) In 1905, Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály, traveling the back roads of Hungary, began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were only armed 这里traveling的位置是不是很好,但是也可以理解为表示伴随动作,就在两个人的名字后面,而后面就是谓语动词,也没有夹心修饰的问题。后面的and they,这里也没有什么问题,they代替了前面的主语,之所以要重复一下,就是因为距离那两个人太远了。A do, and A(they,it) do结构是对的。一个例子就是: Iguanas have been an important food source in 谢谢指教!
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总体语感,B显得不够简洁。
具体分析一下,B中的they指什么呢?仅指Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály 吗?
显然不是,但是,此处指Hungary,Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály 太牵强。至少有些指代不清。
而C用traveling the back roads of Hungary armed only,巧妙的使ONLY后的内容逻辑意思上包含了Hungary,Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály 。
我倒是选C的,读着最流畅,但是回头想想C加一个and 或加一个逗号就更完美了吧。加了逗号就是优先指代主语,不加好像就是就近修饰紧靠它的名词并且中间没有插入成分。
——不知道我对ed分词的理解对不对
only确实跟原句有点不一样,原句是说装备的东西仅有些什么,B是说仅装备某些东西这个动作而没有其他动词,体会一下——动作是装备装备的东西only这些,和only做了装备XX的事情,是不一样的。
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