标题: 求助，OG16 Verbal分册第44题。谢谢各位的帮助啦。 [打印本页] 作者: sunruixue 时间: 2015-8-13 23:05 标题: 求助，OG16 Verbal分册第44题。谢谢各位的帮助啦。 44. In A.D. 391, resulting from the destruction of the largest library of the ancient world at Alexandria, later generations lost all but the Iliad and Odyssey among Greek epics, most of the poetry of Pindar and Sappho, and dozens of plays by Aeschylus and Euripides.
(A) resulting from the destruction of the largest library of the ancient world at Alexandria,
(B) the destroying of the largest library of the ancient world at Alexandria resulted and
(C) because of the result of the destruction of the library at Alexandria, the largest of the ancient world,
(D) as a result of the destruction of the library at Alexandria, the largest of the ancient world,
(E) Alexandria’s largest library of the ancient world was destroyed, and the result was
作者: tophoenix 时间: 2015-8-13 23:26
我试着说说
1。 resulting 网后面找修饰， 不可能是later generation.
2. the destroying of 就不用看了。还有library, 后面俩修饰， 一个 ofthe ancient world, 另一个是at alexandria 这个不被接受。
3。beause of 后面的名次就是原因。"the result of" 不好，OG 里面说过类似的话。
5。of the ancient world是说图书馆呢？还是亚历山大？
Because it is introduced by a participle, the phrase that begins resulting from
illogically modifies later generations. Substituting the idiom as a result of for
resulting from corrects this error. The largest library of the ancient world at
Alexandria is both cumbersome and ambiguous because it suggests that the
ancient world was located at (and only at) Alexandria. This problem is best
corrected by breaking the series of phrases into two distinct parts: the library at
Alexandria, the largest of the ancient world. Here, the second phrase clearly
modifies the first.
A Resulting from illogically modifies later generations. The series of
prepositional phrases is confusing and ambiguous.
B The destroying of is wordy and awkward. And creates a second main
clause, which would need to be appropriately punctuated with a comma
before and.
C Because of the result of is redundant.
D Correct. As a result of begins the phrase clearly and correctly in this
sentence; the library rather than the ancient world is properly located at
Alexandria; the largest of the ancient world correctly modifies library.
E Alexandria’s largest library of the ancient world is an illogical reference.
The result was must be followed by that.