Almost a decade after New York State passed
laws to protect patients by reducing the grueling hours worked by medical
residents, twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical
officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residents
work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical
residents work more than 95 hours a week.
所以 B 更不对了么 that从句根本不知道修释谁的， 你看 C 对称得多工整。
这里 3 个 that ... 均是 found 的宾语从句。
... found that ...., that ...., and that .... .
如果只有一个 that 宾语从句的话，还是不要用逗号隔开的好。
if A is changed to
twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
A is right?
Thank you
if A is changed to
twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
A is right?
Thank you
A改过来应该也有问题，twelve hospitals变成为finding的主语，改变了原来的逻辑意思。
B.an investigation by state medical officials of twelve hospitals have found all twelve consistently breaking the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, with more than half the surgical residents working
C.an investigation of twelve hospitals by state medical officials has found that all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
B.C,的逻辑主语是INVESTIGATION, 发出动作FINDING,逻辑上讲不通啊。
D的逻辑比较通， 还是STATE MEDICAL OFFICIALS WHO FOUND 比较靠谱，并且语法上也说得过去。
D，twelve hospitals were investigated by state medical officials who found all twelve breaking the laws, with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight, and more than half the surgical residents work
A从EFFECTIVENESS的角度来说,A 的省略THAT总比B.C的逻辑不通强啊。大伙给点意见先。
A.twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
A：finding的逻辑主语是twelve hospital,显然不通
B：主谓搭配不对
C：that,that,and that 正确
D：twelve hospitals were investigated by state medical officials who found all twelve breaking the laws, with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight, and more than half the surgical residents work with...and...中间不应该有逗号
E：that,that,with不符合平行
请NN分析我说的对不对
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