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作者: chenlujing 时间: 2015-5-16 16:27
标题: 求助OGSC87

OG 87.According to scientists who monitored its path, an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, which brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocking out a communications satellite.

(A) an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, which brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocking

(B) an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun was what recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, and it brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocked

(C) an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, brightening the Northern Lights and possibly knocking

(D) a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, recently triggered by an expanding cloud of energized particles, brightened the Northern Lights and it possibly

knocked

(E) a large storm in the magnetic field surrounding Earth was recently triggered by an expanding cloud of energized particles, brightening the Northern Lights and it possibly knocked Logical predication; Rhetorical construction;

求问未划线its指代什么

还有句子的是主语到底是cloud 还是particles

作者: ukyo2003 时间: 2015-5-17 10:55
你贴的整个题目都没划线，建议自己进高级模式编辑好了再发。

According to scientists who monitored its path, an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, which brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocking out a communications satellite.

从句开头用代词its，语法要求逗号后面马上跟its的主语原型，所以cloud就是主语。its就指代cloud

作者: freethebmw 时间: 2015-6-21 20:29
这道题我们要从语义的角度去理解，第一句话讲了scientists who monitored its path，这里的its总要有个指代吧，毫无疑问应该优先指代后面那句的主语，那么究竟是指代cloud呢还是storm呢？我们接着看。
这句话的意思大概就是这个什么什么什么的cloud最近激发了环绕地球磁场区的large storm，随后导致了brighten the northern lights and knock out a communications satellite。
好了，看到这里你大概能理解了scientist监测path不应该是storm的path而是cloud的path，因为这个storm是被recently trigger出来的，你怎么监测啊。
光这一点split不够，我们再分析分析，5个选项中其实只有C和E通过v-ing表达出了“cloud激发large storm”导致的结果，这个结果是什么什么。这个结果不是cloud单独导致的，也不是storm单独导致的，也是cloud作用于storm之后导致的，因此用现在分词表示伴随结果非常合适。
比较C和E呢，其实很明显E中brightening和it knocked不平行，当然前面也提到了，storm作为主句主语也是不合适的，所以C是最佳选项。

作者: chenlujing 时间: 2015-7-4 14:29

freethebmw 发表于 2015-6-21 20:29
这道题我们要从语义的角度去理解，第一句话讲了scientists who monitored its path，这里的its总要有个指代 ...

同意！

作者: elusive 时间: 2016-2-19 09:09
我的做题思路：
A里面的那个which可能修饰到earth，不好，放到最后讨论。
B里面的那个was what recently triggered太复杂，为什么不用recently triggered. 放到最后讨论。
C读起来没问题而且修复了AB的问题，很好。而且后面平行。很有可能是正确答案。
D删除插入语a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth后发现句子不完整，错误，直接删去
E前面用了被动不是很好，但是后面brightening和it kncked不平行，错误直接删去。
剩下ABC，C优于AB所以选择C

作者: elusive 时间: 2016-2-19 09:11
这个题its代指谁都行，关键看后面的错误。如果你发现有一个问题不好判断，那么解题关键很可能就在后面。做题纠结于某一点是一个忌讳因为第一浪费时间第二会想的头疼第三会忽略其他关键因素。

作者: djdyzqq 时间: 2017-7-11 12:08

freethebmw 发表于 2015-6-21 20:29
这道题我们要从语义的角度去理解，第一句话讲了scientists who monitored its path，这里的its总要有个指代 ...

同意！

作者: YLC01 时间: 2018-4-7 09:16
我了解這題主要是考平行，但總結的時候有一個問題很想釐清

(C) an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, brightening the Northern Lights and possibly knocking

(E) a large storm in the magnetic field surrounding Earth was recently triggered by an expanding cloud of energized particles, brightening the Northern Lights and it possibly knocked Logical predication; Rhetorical construction;

不曉得紅字的部份有沒有什麼優劣區分?
這邊的考法是否是關係代名詞子句限定，主動用that好過於Ving?

這題有不少其他考點，但是關於我問這個問題，希望有人可以幫忙解答。
謝謝~

作者: jamessage 时间: 2019-2-22 11:31
c选项里面，为什么可以用surrounds呢？不需要用过去式吗？

作者: 典座 时间: 2020-3-14 12:19

freethebmw 发表于 2015-6-21 20:29
这道题我们要从语义的角度去理解，第一句话讲了scientists who monitored its path，这里的its总要有个指代 ...

同意！

作者: vicar 时间: 2020-8-1 17:26
c选项 brightening 在这个地方不应该修饰surround？

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