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作者: illgetthere    时间: 2005-3-20 23:56
标题: 我搜集的一些好模板

AI:


(1)   just refute:


Thers days we often hear about the concern over the issue of …


The arguer advocates that…, but is this really the case? However


Sound this argument may be, it only skims the surface of the problem.


Moreover, it appears insignificant when the negative influence is taken


Into account. As far as I am concerned, I believe that… I base my view on


Two reasons.


(2)   just spport:


Recently the issue of …has been brought to public attention.


Current wisdom says that…  In a sense, …do(does)… I base my view


On two reasons. First, … Second, …


(3)   two points, support one while refute another:


These days we often hear about the concern over the issue of…


The extent to which… involves a conflict between… and … On the


Surface, it may seem a sound idea that …, but carefully weighing on


The mind, I agree that … takes precedence over… I base my view on two


Reasons.


(4)   suppor boths stands---a balanced approach:


These days we often hear about the concern over the issue of… The


Extent to which involves a conflict between… and …  It seems to me


That there are good points in both arguments, and after carefully weighing


On the mind, I believe that we should pay attention to both… and …


One should take a balanced approach to… on a case-by-case basis.


In the first place, the reason why I have such a view is that…


A particular example for this is … Under this circumstance, it is obvious that…


In the second place, much evidence has shown that… Just imagine what would


Be like if … Hence, another equally important aspect is that…


One argument against my contention might assert that, by nature, …, and that


I am simply underestimating… Yet substantial evidence exists to the contrary…


For example,… Given this, … is certainly warranted.


I conclusion, it is in our best interest as a society… Due to the above-mentioned


Reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become


More persuasive, we may safely arrive at the conclusion I support. If …, with


Its claim for … , could be harmonized with the concerns of … , a more fruitful


Model for contemporary… could emerge.




The issue of whether...is a complex and controversial one.


              Different people hold different views due to their respective


              angles. On one hand, as is well-known and has often been


              advocated, ...; on the other hand, others probably insist that....


              We do not have to look very far to see the valid standpoint of


              this matter. In the following analysis, I would like to reason and


              provide evidence favoring the former one and refuting the latter


              one. (The complex nature of the above issue requires us to


              consider it on a case-by-case basis. In my point of view, whether


              one has advantages over the other depends on the specific


              circumstances.)



              In the first place, the important reason that can be presented to


              develop my position is that.... A good example may be found in the


              case that.... Under this circumstance/therefore, it is obvious


              that....



              In addition, there is another reason for me to choose the former


              statement/consider the latter statement to be wrong. The reason is


              not far to seek:.... To illustrate, a case in point in this


              respect is that....



              Admittedly, there is no denying that...in some conditions. As we


              know, .... However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient


              support to.... (When...of X and Y are carefully compared, the most


              striking conclusion is obvious. To sum up, while...may be true in


              exceptional cases, I agree that....)



              Consequently, I advocate that..., because: (1) ...; (2) .... Due


              to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form


              an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we may safely


              arrive at the conclusion I support.




Aa:


In this argument the author reaches the conclusion that…


The basis for this recommendation is that …


An additional reason given in support of this recommendation


Is that … ( The author cites … as an example in support of


This recommendation). At first glance, the author’s argument


Appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals


That it omits some important concerns that should be addressed to


Substantiate the argument.


In the first place,


In the second place,


In the third place,


In conclusion, the author fails to provide adequate justification for…


As it stands, the reasoning does not constitute a logical argument in


Favor of the recommendation. To strengthen the argument, the author


        Would have to provide evidence to prove that…  To better assess the


        Argument, we need additional detailed information about … so that we can


        Establish the conclusion whether…




              严重推荐:Argument之七宗罪



              第一宗罪:无因果联系  after this, therefore because of this


              The author commits a fallacy of causal oversimplification. The


              line of the reasoning is that because A occurred before B, the


              former event is responsible for the latter. (The author uses the


              positive correlation between A and B to establish causality.


              However, the fact that A coincides with B does not necessarily


              prove that A caused B.) But this is fallacious reasoning unless


              other possible causal explanations have been considered and ruled


              out. For example, perhaps C is the cause of these events or


              perhaps B is caused by D.




              第二宗罪 Insufficient-sample


              The evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the


              conclusion drawn from it. One example is logically unsounded to


              establish a general conclusion (The statistics from only a few


              recent years are not necessarily a good indicator of future


              trends), unless it can be shown that A1 is representative of all


              A. It is possible that.... In fact, in face of such limited


              evidence, the conclusion that B is completely unwarranted.




              第三宗罪: 错误类比 (based on a false analogy )<横向>


              The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in


              all respects. This assumption is weak, since although there are


              points of comparison between A and B, there is much dissimilarity


              as well. For example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much


              more difficult for B to do....




              第四宗罪 all things are equal<纵向>


              The author commits the fallacy of “all things are equal”. The fact


              that happened two years ago is not a sound evidence to draw a


              conclusion that.... The author assumes without justification that


              the background conditions have remained the same at different


              times or at different locations. However, it is not clear in this


              argument whether the current conditions at AA are the same as they


              used to be two years ago. Thus it is impossible to conclude


              that....




              第五宗罪 Either-Or choice


              The author assumes that AA and BB are mutually exclusive


              alternatives and there is no room for a middle ground. However,


              the author provides no reason for imposing an either-or choice.


              Common sense tells us that adjusting both AA and BB might produce


              better results.




              第六宗罪 survey is doubtful


              The poll cited by the author is too vague to be informative. The


              claim does not indicate who conducted the poll, who responded, or


              when, where and how the poll was conducted. (Lacking information


              about the number of people surveyed and the number of respondents,


              it is impossible to access the validity of the results. For


              example, if 200 persons were surveyed but only 2 responded, the


              conclusion that...would be highly suspect. Because the argument


              offers no evidence that would rule out this kind of


              interpretations,) Until these questions are answered, the results


              of the survey are worthless as evidence for the conclusion.




              第七宗罪 gratuitous assumption


              The author falsely depends on gratuitous assumption that....


              However, no evidence is stated in the argument to support this


              assumption. In fact, this is not necessarily the case. For


              example, it is more likely that.... Therefore, this argument is


              unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.





              六分模版:


                            The author in this argument is trying to establish that Apogee


              Company should close down its field offices and conduct all its


              operations from a single location. This conclusion is based on the


              assertion that Apogee Company’s more profit in the past years was


              simply caused by operating in one location. To support this


              conclusion, the author reasons that such centralization would


              improve profitability by cutting costs.  In addition, he assumes


              that centralization would help the company maintain better


              supervision of all employees. Closely examining the author’s logic


              and reasoning, we find that neither of these reasons provides


              sufficient support for the conclusion and this argument suffers


              two serious logical flaws.



                            First of all, this argument relies on a groundless assumption that


             the reason why Apogee Company is less profitable than before is


              because it was operated in multiple locations.


              However, no evidence stated in the report supports this crucial


              assumption. There are many other factors that could have caused or


              contributed to the result that the Apogee Company is less


              profitable. It is possible that the competitors of Apogee Company


              are stronger than past; it is also possible that the slowdown of


              the overall economical environment have caused the less


              profitability on today than past. Any of these scenarios, if true,


              would show that Apogee Company’s poor financial performance is not


              due to the multi- location operation. Therefore, without ruling


              out other factors or presenting stronger evidence, the author


              cannot conclusively assert that Apogee should close down its field


              offices and conduct all its operations from a single location.



                            Second, the author commits the “after this and therefore because


              of this” fallacy where the author assumes that because the poor


              financial performance occurred after the Apogee Company conducted


              its operation from more than one location, the multi-location


              operation was responsible for the poor financial performance. The


              statistical relationship between the poor financial performance


              and multi-location operation can not necessarily establish the


              causality between Apogee Company’s poor financial performance and


              its multi location operation. In fact, the author obviously


              ignored the possibility of other alternative factors such as the


              price increase of raw materials, or the extra expense for the


              construction of new factory, which may contribute to the Apogee


              Company’s poor financial performance. It may be only a coincidence


              that the poor financial performance happened after Apogee Company


              moved from one location operation to multi-location operation.


              Unless the author can rule out other factors relevant to the


              relation between poor financial performance and multi- location


              operation, this assumption is in question and can not be accepted.



                            In conclusion, this argument is ineffective because the author


              commits the above mentioned logical mistakes. The author could


              strengthen the conclusion that Apogee Company should close its


              field offices and conducts all its operation in single location by


              demonstrating that the poor financial performance was a result of


              multi-location operation.


作者: brace    时间: 2005-3-21 02:58
谢谢分享:)
作者: beautywawa    时间: 2005-3-21 08:12
Thanks for shariing!!!
作者: zhoushao    时间: 2005-3-25 13:57
谢谢!!!
作者: zikineko    时间: 2005-3-25 17:08
thx,illgetthere
作者: judydongxueni    时间: 2005-4-17 13:20
非常好用,谢谢分享
作者: jswq95    时间: 2005-6-10 00:23

thanks



作者: afcyrus    时间: 2005-6-11 17:44
顶一下楼主
作者: happyfish0517    时间: 2005-8-10 21:54
顶!!多谢!!
作者: 雪莲花    时间: 2005-9-18 08:35
顶, 多谢分享
作者: ESeraph    时间: 2005-9-19 00:13
thanks.
作者: Youknowme    时间: 2005-10-8 18:10
thanks a million
作者: FionaLiang    时间: 2005-10-9 20:55
感谢呀!
作者: chengjie    时间: 2007-3-5 16:20

thank you


作者: zhanshuting    时间: 2008-3-28 23:04

谢谢lz


作者: weideng    时间: 2008-3-31 08:12

3Q


作者: ypurple    时间: 2008-4-10 14:39
谢谢分享:)
作者: bigbasin    时间: 2008-6-30 21:31

感谢分享


作者: yifan326    时间: 2008-9-24 20:32

作者: yifan326    时间: 2008-9-24 20:37
没有文档形式的吗
作者: 岳如初    时间: 2008-10-13 23:28
非常感谢!!
作者: 丁小丁    时间: 2008-10-14 12:39
谢谢啦
作者: 清茶兑水    时间: 2008-10-14 23:35

一直有个困惑~
为什么GRE 的Arguement也是有模板,成天有人讨论雷同的问题。

GMAT的作文很相似,为什么没有人考虑雷同呢?


作者: happyfish543    时间: 2009-5-3 16:31

作者: lbvslzvsmom    时间: 2009-7-21 13:51
感谢~
作者: leavesye    时间: 2009-11-26 23:50
感谢!
作者: rabbitear    时间: 2010-4-20 09:18
多谢分享
作者: sunnyfangyuan    时间: 2010-9-20 21:57
谢谢楼主!!!
作者: scarf1978    时间: 2010-10-6 11:45
danke!
作者: tita    时间: 2010-10-27 22:32
thanks a lot
作者: angelazhao222    时间: 2010-11-11 14:04
很有帮助!
作者: smily0605    时间: 2011-5-9 17:00
太无私了
作者: 醉清风额    时间: 2012-10-22 01:53
谢谢楼主!




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