【Native Speaker每日综合训练—41系列】【41-15】Juvenile Delinquency

snowy24

AgendaChen 发表于 2014-9-15 13:27
2+3+4time
Steinberg explains that unlike adults, whose brains are mature, teenagers are more likely  ...

牛牛，你怎么额可以一下子写错这么多？是有后面重新组织写的么？

snowy24

T2 1'35
the justice systerm shoul be rethink
the brain of the adolescent have two systerms ,the braking one on develop slowly
T3 1'52
adolescent with peers is more sensitive with reward
connection with other regions of brain
T4 1'38
a parents play protects the youngsters from engaging the risky and reckless crime
most of the criminal do not crimi when they grow up
the justify systerm cannot justify the adolesents without ...
T5  2'24
juvenile sentencing should be different because their brain is hot fully develop
and they lack the decision-making ability of adults
T6  2'31
the law and the science...
THE REST
criminal mentality
blind punishment cannot address that the difference between juvenile and adults is inpropriate

THE OBSTACLE
adult crime ,adult time suggest that adult justify systerm dont fit with the juvenile crime
how did they prove what they say about juvenile who need to be punish different from adults in the same circum
some facts should be taken into consideration

AgendaChen

snowy24 发表于 2014-9-25 01:03
牛牛，你怎么额可以一下子写错这么多？是有后面重新组织写的么？

慢慢练呗，反正每次都强迫自己写多一点，最开始可能看完加写完要花2个小时，练一个多月，可能就一个小时了

疯狂的狐狸

done~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

snowy24

AgendaChen 发表于 2014-9-25 11:12
慢慢练呗，反正每次都强迫自己写多一点，最开始可能看完加写完要花2个小时，练一个多月，可能就一个小时 ...

我才刚开始！那你会不会特意背一些词汇或者词组呢？

AgendaChen

snowy24 发表于 2014-9-26 03:17
我才刚开始！那你会不会特意背一些词汇或者词组呢？

没有特意吧，就想到什么写什么了，不过我觉得你也可以去特意背一些

snowy24

AgendaChen 发表于 2014-9-26 08:49
没有特意吧，就想到什么写什么了，不过我觉得你也可以去特意背一些

谢谢~现在是不敢动逻辑，阅读和语法都比较容易提高，逻辑就是思维的东西。。。

chenlang4869

time2 2'04
scientists are arguing that since the brain of the adolescents are still developing, the legal system should rethink the way they manage the mibehave adolescents
time 3 1'33
The young persons take more risks when involed with their friends than they do when alone. this is different from adults. the scientist also reveals that the brain-managing prefrontal cortex is chaning during the person's growing.
time4 1'22
IT'S BETTER TO HAVE AN ADULT TO guide the behaviour of the young adolescent. 90%of the young criminal did not become an adult criminal.
time5 3'00
The court ruled that the young adolescents should not be seriously punished because they can not be fullly responsible for their behaviour. However the preseutor and former judge holds that the court should not apply the general concept that adolescents' brain are developing to all the criminal cases done by them.
time6 4'39
The california Court has done the right judgements when dealing with the adolescents crime. There is a need to consider many factors when punishing someone.

bubuuuu

[Time 2]       
273       
2’08”       
reward seaking system of adolescent is easily aroused.
1.
Breaking system is weak
[Time 3]       
256       
1'38"       
2.
the risk when adolescent feels being watched during basketball playing doubles as compares to adult
3.
the brain more effectively communicate with other brain region until mid 20s.
[Time 4]       
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1'29"       
4.
children's parents can set external restriction on them.
5.
90%of the juvournile criminal won't do crime when they grow up.
6.
the government should keep a juvournile jurisdiction system
[Time 5]       
363       
3'03"       
juvenile are regarded only possesses 3/4 decision-making ability of that of adults. Thus the juvenile crime was conscend less severe. The heaviest sentence was life sentence.
[Time 6]       
369       
3'05"       
it is up to the law to descide whether the defenders of crime should earn their chances of getting out of jail earlier.
The jurisdiction and science has two different approaches to distinguish adults and juvenile
[Paraphrase 7]       
323       
1'52"       
young people tend to focus more on prompt reward will get involved in juvenile crime more easily.
While once a person can see his/herself in the future more vividly, they crime will diminish more.
more senior juvenile should be punished more.

SukeyZhou


Time 2  00:01:49
Time 3  00:01:35
Time 4  00:01:33
Time 5  00:02:26
Time 6  00:02:21
Paraphrase 7  00:12:52