给2014年要考试的亲~~独立作文~~~2013年北美地区托福考试写作真题及解析

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【开头】
The lecture apparently disproves what is argued in the reading material. According to the passage… However the professor asserts that a closer scrutiny of this argument wouldreveal how flimsy it is. He then presents several evidences to demonstrate his statement.

【没考虑到别的可能性OP】
To start with, the professor claims that thereading passage fails to take into account that…
Therefore, the assertion of the authorseems too absolute since other possibilities could not be eliminated by any currentevidence.

【假设错误WA】
Furthermore, the passage assumes that…. Theprofessor, however, suggests that this assumption may not be merited by theevidence. Say, ….. The contradiction is obvious here when … . On the basis ofthis point the lecture explicitly refutes the passage.

【部分正确，但忽视了事实NT】
Last but not the least, the passage may beright about …., but one critical fact is being left out of consideration. Pointedout by the professor, the author totally neglects the truth that… On account ofabove-mentioned grave mistakes, the author’s assertion turned out to be apreposterous idea.

In conclusion, based on the argumentsoffered above, the professor clearly identifies the defects in the readingpassage and forcefully shows that…

文中至少有一个举例形式，如果实在用不到上面句型，可以用转述凑字数：In other words, that is to say, …

Argue = contend

其他有用句型：The reading assumes that…, a situation that seems to be atodds with … 与…是矛盾的

词汇：
premise 前提
believe deeply 深信不疑
understand = comprehend 理解
Assumption = supposition

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