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[录取汇报] In @Notre Dame with a $80K fellowship

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发表于 2015-12-19 04:54:05 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
刚收到Notre Dame offer一枚,每年给4万,两年8万
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沙发
发表于 2015-12-19 08:42:26 | 只看该作者
楼主好厉害,能具体讲讲essay写作和面试吗?现在写他家的essay, 感觉无从下手,多谢啦
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2015-12-19 13:54:27 | 只看该作者
MaggieTall 发表于 2015-12-19 08:42
楼主好厉害,能具体讲讲essay写作和面试吗?现在写他家的essay, 感觉无从下手,多谢啦 ...

我写essay的时候参考了这个tip,希望对你有帮助
1. Your responsibility as a lifelong member of the Mendoza community is to Ask More of Business – to exemplify individual integrity, organizational excellence, and a concern for the greater good. How do you plan to do this in your professional career?

This is a question asking you to show that you belong in the Mendoza community with the emphasis that it puts on service and ethics, as well as organizational leadership. There are different ways to approach this question. Here are two possibilities:

1. Present an experience that shows you demonstrating managerial ability, integrity, and a concern for the greater good or a commitment to service. Tell that story and then analyze what you learned from the experience. How did your understanding of these essential (for Mendoza) values evolve as a result of this event. How do you intend to apply that understanding and those lessons in the future?

2. Use three different experiences to show each of the qualities that Mendoza is looking for and weave them together with a unifying themes. Then again, take the lessons you learned from these different experiences and show how you intend to use them going forward.

With the first the first approach is you can go into greater depth, both about the experience and what you learned, but you may have trouble defining such an experience. With the second approach, you risk a travelogue type of approach, but it may work better in terms of the three values.

In both cases, make sure you answer the question about how you intend to fulfill your responsibility as a member of the Mendoza community in the future.

地板
发表于 2015-12-19 14:39:39 | 只看该作者
BIG CONG!!!
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发表于 2015-12-20 00:02:59 | 只看该作者
lz会选哪个呢?ND还是Georgetown?
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-12-23 14:10:39 | 只看该作者
maple123 发表于 2015-12-20 00:02
lz会选哪个呢?ND还是Georgetown?

我应该会去GT吧,还是想去大城市,不可免俗,哈
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