2.2 懒虫之复习日记（请帮看看作文）

woodlin

想考托福很久了，终于报上名了。总结我这个人总处于很想做事却懒于动手的状态，而且特别容易满足。常常很花很长时间make a perfect plan，然后屁颠屁颠的觉得完成了一项伟大的使命，奖励自己玩几天，仿佛制定了计划就等于考玩了试，我想再也没有比我更差劲的了。今天好好检讨一下，因为距考期不远了，怎么着也得改改了。这两天，我把12月的独立口语和独立写作机经整理了一下，1个小时也挤不出一篇，好不容易挤点东西狠命念也念不完，急死我了。下面是一篇我写的玩意儿，大家提个意见。

Dec.1

1.       Describe an enjoyable event impressed in your childhood

As far as my memory can reach, one of the most enjoyable events that impressed on in my childhood is my first skating experience when I was on 4^th grade. It was an annual

spring trip of my class. I had never expected that skating would have been to be that

difficult. Even before I successfully put both skating shoes on, I had already fallen

several times. I couldn’t help myself wondering ‘Am I that clumsy?’ I noticed

that the same thing happened to many of my friends. Finally, some of us decided to move slowly together hand in hand, and of course we ended up in falling all over the ground. We really enjoyed ourselves that day. I don’t remember how those falls hurt, but I still remember my friends’ warm little hands and their hearty laughs. I think, that was one of the most enjoyable events in my childhood.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-11 23:12:57编辑过]

大海是我

以下是引用woodlin在2007-1-9 14:05:00的发言：

常常很花很长时间make a perfect plan，然后屁颠屁颠的觉得完成了一项伟大的使命，奖励自己玩几天，仿佛制定了计划就等于考玩了试，我想再也没有比我更差劲的了。

哈哈，原来是同道中人啊　楼主什么时候考？

加油！

woodlin

以下是引用大海是我在2007-1-9 21:57:00的发言：

哈哈，原来是同道中人啊　楼主什么时候考？

加油！

2.2考。一起加油！

我的复习计划是根据我的弱项口语和写作来制定的。

1、口语：根据近2~3个月的机经口语独立口语题准备样文，反复录音练习；已经写了7篇独立口语了（贴了1篇，没人指点就不再丢人现眼了）。还有通过OG、delta的材料锻炼综合口语部分。

2、写作：基本同上，再准备一些常用的句式和词。

3、听力：OG和Delta, OG做完了，大概1篇错1题，delta才做完CD1的练习，共错2题。发现要锻炼lecture的记笔记能力。

4、阅读：OG的已经做完了，大概1篇错1个。时间刚好用完，希望能提高阅读速度，考试的时候才能游刃有余。请教还有什么阅读材料比较适合做呢？

woodlin

才看到我的标题改了，真好，一目了然，谢谢版主。

wyuanl

挺好的，如果翻译成中文就是一篇很典型的小学生作文了啊。ETS的口语题真的很像小学命题作文。

woodlin

以下是引用wyuanl在2007-1-10 19:26:00的发言：

挺好的，如果翻译成中文就是一篇很典型的小学生作文了啊。ETS的口语题真的很像小学命题作文。

谢谢鼓励。今天又写了几篇，发现常写错别字，担心没有word的纠错功能可咋办？还有怎么作文越写越像书面文章，口语考试说出这么文绉绉的人家相信是临场发挥的嘛？这两天埋头写独立口语的答案，好像对口语没有什么提高呀。再贴一篇，请大家提提意见。

1.       描述一个你喜欢的艺术作品，诗歌、歌曲或绘画, 为什么让你印象深刻.. Describe an art such as song or painting that gives you long lasting impression.

As a Chinese, I am quite impressed by the Chinese traditional poems written by the great poets in the Tang Dynasty. There are usually 4 or 8 lines in each poem, each line containing 5 or 7 characters, concise but very touching. Its beautiful rhyme and rhythm contributes to the beauty of the poem. Here is a popular one almost every Chinese can recite. The name of the poem is A Tranquil Night. Thanks to the great translator, I have its English version here.

Abed, I see a silver light,
I wonder if it's frost aground.
Looking up, I find the moon bright;
Bowing, in homesickness I'm drowned. 

Being away from my home town for years, I always remember this poem which my father taught me when I was 5 or 6 years old. Now, I can now feel the poet’s  overwhelming homesickness between his lines. It is a pity that people in the world speak different languages, otherwise we could share this great poem in its original taste.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-11 23:14:31编辑过]

cxtopstar

我也是2月2日考,昨天晚上报名的.因为昨天早上才考完G, 打算从明天开始复习托福,我知道时间太可怕的来不及,可是我没办法，你一定比我强的,努力一起

charmant

我觉得作为口语来讲楼主有些太书面化了。看电视剧很少见美国人这么讲话的。有些词汇如clumsy也从来没在口语中很少见到（几乎就没见到过）。反而是另一个awkward出镜频率要高很多了。还有I had never expected that skating would have been that difficult.我觉得说to be that difficult就好了

而且我觉得 'one of the enjoyable events that impressed in my childhood'

should be 'one of the MOST enjoyable events that impressed (ON, or 去掉 IN) my childhood.

个人之见。我口语不好

woodlin

以下是引用charmant在2007-1-11 9:46:00的发言：

我觉得作为口语来讲楼主有些太书面化了。看电视剧很少见美国人这么讲话的。有些词汇如clumsy也从来没在口语中很少见到（几乎就没见到过）。反而是另一个awkward出镜频率要高很多了。还有I had never expected that skating would have been that difficult.我觉得说to be that difficult就好了

而且我觉得 'one of the enjoyable events that impressed in my childhood'

should be 'one of the MOST enjoyable events that impressed (ON, or 去掉 IN) my childhood.

个人之见。我口语不好

谢谢斑竹指点。因为正正经经的写作文，所以太注重语法了，还有确实罗嗦了，改得简单点还更容易在规定的时间内说完。不过，我觉得形容滑冰行动笨拙用clusmy要比awkward更恰当些，awkward电视中形容尴尬的比较常见些，只是个人的见解，不一定对的哦。

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-11 11:42:15编辑过]

woodlin

以下是引用cxtopstar在2007-1-11 9:02:00的发言：
我也是2月2日考,昨天晚上报名的.因为昨天早上才考完G, 打算从明天开始复习托福,我知道时间太可怕的来不及,可是我没办法，你一定比我强的,努力一起

谢谢，你都考了G了，口语多练练就没问题的。咱们一起努力！！