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 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-14 23:19:36 | 只看该作者
TPO9
The reading passage focus on the issue that internal–combustion engine is going to be replaced by the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine. The professor’s lecture deals with the same issue, yet he asserts that the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine has some disadvantages which prevent it from becoming the automobile’s main source of power, which contradicts with what the reading states. In the lecture, he uses three specific points to support his idea.
First of all, even though the reading passage suggested that Hydrogen can be get from a lot of sources like the natural gas and even the water, the professor contends that the Hydrogen is not that easy to be produced and stored.to be used as energy, the Hydrogen must be turn into liquid, which makes it even harder to be produced and stored and at the same time, it requires an mature science and technology.
Moreover, despite the statement in the reading that the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine may solve the environmental problems as its burning products is water, the professor argues in the lecture that it needs a lot of energy to purify the Hydrogen and turn it into liquid. And the process of it may pollute the environment instead.
Finally, the author of the reading claims that the hydrogen-based fuel-cell will be much cheaper since it will provide more energy while the professor of the passage asserts that it will be more expensive for the hydrogen-based fuel-cell since it will use a kind of mental, which is very expensive.
In conclusion, the professor clearly identities the weakness in the reading passage and convincingly shows that the central argument in the reading passage that internal-combustion engine is going to be replaced by the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine is incorrect.

  
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-14 23:21:21 | 只看该作者
yagiliang 发表于 2013-11-14 21:33
hi ,11.13的作文修改好了。
你是只写了独立是吗?
我昨天报的是独立和综合,但我看到我们是互改,以下是我 ...

我的综合也发了,麻烦了哦
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-15 10:45:46 | 只看该作者
psychoarya 发表于 2013-11-14 21:08
能力有限,希望多多包涵!

谢谢哦!看了觉得你改的很对!!!
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发表于 2013-11-15 12:42:01 | 只看该作者
改好啦,你看看

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-15 15:58:32 | 只看该作者
yagiliang 发表于 2013-11-15 12:42
改好啦,你看看

谢谢!谢谢!
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-15 16:01:35 | 只看该作者
11.15的作文哦,辛苦小伙伴了~

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-17 17:55:08 | 只看该作者
11月17号的作业,谢谢修改~

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发表于 2013-11-18 22:49:43 | 只看该作者
你好,不好意思,11.15号的作文现在才交,之前确实有点忙,辛苦你的修改了。
http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-877065-1-1.html
非常感谢
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发表于 2013-11-20 19:38:53 | 只看该作者
能力有限 望见谅

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