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作者: 山峰 时间: 2003-3-9 00:42
标题: awa模板及七宗罪
说明：七宗罪是攻克AA之必备法宝。

模版部分：

Argument

In this argument the author reaches the conclusion that.... The basis for this recommendation is that.... An additional reason given in support of this recommendation is that...(The author cites...as an example in support of this recommendation). At first glance, the author's argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it omits some important concerns that should be addressed to substantiate the argument.

In the first place,

In the second place,

In the third place,

In conclusion, the author fails to provide adequate justification for.... As it stands, the reasoning does not constitute a logical argument in favor of the recommendation. To strengthen the argument, the author would have to provide evidence to prove that.... To better assess the argument, we need additional detailed information about...so that we can establish the conclusion whether....

Issue

The issue of whether...is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different views due to their respective angles. On the one hand, as is well-known and has often been advocated, ...; on the other hand, others probably insist that.... We do not have to look very far to see the valid standpoint of this matter. In the following analysis, I would like to reason and provide evidence favoring the former one and refuting the latter one. (The complex nature of the above issue requires us to consider it on a case-by-case basis. In my point of view, whether one has advantages over the other depends on the specific circumstances.)

In the first place, the important reason that can be presented to develop my position is that.... A good example may be found in the case that.... Under this circumstance/therefore, it is obvious that....

In addition, there is another reason for me to choose the former statement/consider the latter statement to be wrong. The reason is not far to seek:.... To illustrate, a case in point in this respect is that....

Admittedly, there is no denying that...in some conditions. As we know, .... However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to.... (When...of X and Y are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion is obvious. To sum up, while...may be true in exceptional cases, I agree that....)

Consequently, I advocate that..., because: (1) ...; (2) .... Due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we may safely arrive at the conclusion I support.

严重推荐：Argument之七宗罪

第一宗罪：无因果联系
The author commits a fallacy of causal oversimplification. The line of the reasoning is that because A occurred before B, the former event is responsible for the latter. (The author uses the positive correlation between A and B to establish causality. However, the fact that A coincides with B does not necessarily prove that A caused B.) But this is fallacious reasoning unless other possible causal explanations have been considered and ruled out. For example, perhaps C is the cause of these events or perhaps B is caused by D.

第二宗罪 Insufficient-sample
The evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is logically unsounded to establish a general conclusion (The statistics from only a few recent years are not necessarily a good indicator of future trends), unless it can be shown that A1 is representative of all A. It is possible that.... In fact, in face of such limited evidence, the conclusion that B is completely unwarranted.

第三宗罪: 错误类比 (based on a false analogy )<横向>
The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in all respects. This assumption is weak, since although there are points of comparison between A and B, there is much dissimilarity as well. For example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B to do....

第四宗罪 all things are equal<纵向>
The author commits the fallacy of “all things are equal”. The fact that happened two years ago is not a sound evidence to draw a conclusion that.... The author assumes without justification that the background conditions have remained the same at different times or at different locations. However, it is not clear in this argument whether the current conditions at AA are the same as they used to be two years ago. Thus it is impossible to conclude that....

第五宗罪 Either-Or choice
The author assumes that AA and BB are mutually exclusive alternatives and there is no room for a middle ground. However, the author provides no reason for imposing an either-or choice. Common sense tells us that adjusting both AA and BB might produce better results.

第六宗罪 survey is doubtful
The poll cited by the author is too vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who conducted the poll, who responded, or when, where and how the poll was conducted. (Lacking information about the number of people surveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to access the validity of the results. For example, if 200 persons were surveyed but only 2 responded, the conclusion that...would be highly suspect. Because the argument offers no evidence that would rule out this kind of interpretations,) Until these questions are answered, the results of the survey are worthless as evidence for the conclusion.

第七宗罪 gratuitous assumption
The author falsely depends on gratuitous assumption that.... However, no evidence is stated in the argument to support this assumption. In fact, this is not necessarily the case. For example, it is more likely that.... Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.

作者: behero 时间: 2003-3-22 20:19
终于见到了久仰的七宗罪！先是谢谢前人的努力和无私，我一定要考个好成绩才对得起你们的努力啊！

作者: dinno 时间: 2003-3-22 23:20
behero bro,

wait your good news!

作者: Nancymsu 时间: 2003-5-12 10:01
我还有5天就考试了,可是作文还有很多没看,有的看了也写不出来,我都快急死了,各位大侠又有没有什么办法,这里先谢了.

作者: anchoret 时间: 2003-5-12 10:35
选个模版，略作修改，一天写2篇。作文是可以速成的（记得有一篇经验叫2天5.5分）。没有话说的情况下用废话模版，至少字数就够了，其他技巧（如增加字数的技巧、最近考过的题目整理）请参见拙文《gmat作文复习指引》

作者: yanxiunet 时间: 2003-10-1 15:58
thank for your template!

作者: xuxu 时间: 2003-10-4 23:40
Thanks for the greating sharing! i only have 8 days to go for the test, this definitely helps!!!

作者: jjjgggmmm 时间: 2003-10-25 21:02
the statistics....are a good indicator ....
is it grammatical?

The statistics from only a few recent years are not necessarily a good indicator of future trends

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作者: 雪山飞狐 时间: 2003-10-27 22:37
衷心感谢!

作者: llllll 时间: 2003-11-17 05:46
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作者: Snazzy 时间: 2003-12-16 09:18
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作者: catcat 时间: 2003-12-16 11:55
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作者: lyle 时间: 2003-12-22 16:25
GREAT JOB!
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作者: kathy_sd 时间: 2003-12-24 06:01
看完此帖，信心倍增，谢！

作者: lftr 时间: 2004-2-1 02:39
thanks!!!!!!!!!!

作者: fater 时间: 2004-2-6 11:12
你是典型的大侠，佩服的五体投地。

作者: streetfighter 时间: 2004-2-20 13:02
thanks, it is what i am looking for.

作者: excellent 时间: 2004-2-23 12:05
up!

作者: rabbit 时间: 2004-3-21 13:11
谢谢！

作者: chstc 时间: 2004-5-14 23:42

真不知道是哪个先哲总结出来的。

现在写AA 不到500我停不住，感觉时间不够

作者: tulipmontreal 时间: 2004-5-31 17:25

衷心感谢!

作者: michellelee 时间: 2004-6-30 12:58
great!!

作者: bryanxin 时间: 2004-7-28 13:12
thanks a million !

作者: jjmba 时间: 2004-8-9 17:17

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作者: jjmba 时间: 2004-8-10 14:57
温故而知新！

作者: 阿朱 时间: 2004-9-14 18:38

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作者: yangtau 时间: 2004-10-2 22:42
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作者: sally81 时间: 2004-10-17 10:12
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作者: lifelover 时间: 2004-11-1 12:12
谢了，今天在看到这个“七宗罪”，是不是好老土？

作者: sarah81 时间: 2004-11-15 10:55

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作者: SmileSky 时间: 2004-12-20 12:26
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作者: lianqianli 时间: 2005-1-17 06:06
谢谢

作者: blueshandy 时间: 2005-3-1 21:59
眼红了

作者: bluepearls 时间: 2005-3-3 04:59
感谢分享!

作者: x4444 时间: 2005-3-12 23:27
thanks you contributed.... so moved...
I am going to take the examine soon and I have never exercised AWA since the time is too short.
When I saw these templates, I know I will not take the lowest score for AWA any more. Thanks for all of your efforts.

作者: laolei 时间: 2005-3-24 12:12
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作者: herrydami 时间: 2005-3-31 14:08

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作者: heidi2001f 时间: 2005-4-24 15:54
看到希望了，我还有一个礼拜考作文。斑竹又救我一命！！

作者: winsx2008 时间: 2005-4-27 22:43
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作者: xianer2 时间: 2005-5-5 01:25
thanks very much,

作者: shuuzen 时间: 2005-5-8 21:10
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作者: hotonmi 时间: 2005-5-13 00:12

我来说句实话啊,我以前准备GMAT作文,就是背了上面这个模板,还有七宗罪的内容,题库也没有看过,最后作文是4.5分,不知道象我这么懒的人还有没有了,但是现在想想还是有点怕的,所以大家还是修改一下再用吧.

作者: xianer2 时间: 2005-5-14 02:42
helpful!!!

作者: sunnyting1116 时间: 2005-5-30 10:38
谢谢太好了。

作者: freeman_tj 时间: 2005-6-12 17:27
啥都不说了！谢谢啊！

作者: landy 时间: 2005-6-12 22:55
Thanks so much for the sharing!

作者: drunkbear 时间: 2005-6-20 07:44

太有用了

作者: snowjing 时间: 2005-6-20 07:58
tks.

作者: vivinzone 时间: 2005-6-20 21:13

谢谢！

还是谢谢！

作者: ritazhouxx 时间: 2005-7-1 11:54

thanks!!

作者: shenxiaoyang 时间: 2005-7-19 12:55

终于找到了，有救了，多谢！

作者: swlfx 时间: 2005-7-19 13:23
感谢。

作者: sandiegotj 时间: 2005-7-21 13:25
Thank U! It rocks!

作者: 爱无伤 时间: 2005-7-21 20:22

thanks!

作者: jishuiyu510 时间: 2005-7-24 21:06

新手!想问个见笑的问题,频频听大火提黄金80,这个在哪好下啊?敬请指教!谢谢了!

作者: happyfish0517 时间: 2005-7-24 23:47

以下是引用jishuiyu510在2005-7-24 21:06:00的发言：

新手!想问个见笑的问题,频频听大火提黄金80,这个在哪好下啊?敬请指教!谢谢了!

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=26&ID=38772&replyID=&skin=0

jj下次最好发贴问...在这个长贴后面跟贴...斑斑很可能看不到底~~嘻嘻，下载在上面这个链接中

作者: 横竖撇捺 时间: 2005-7-26 18:26
万分感谢！

作者: snowjing 时间: 2005-7-30 00:01

今天仔细看了”七宗罪”, 发现第二宗”Insufficient-sample”其实包含了好几种逻辑错误(如果分类更细的话), 具体如下: (按lawyer对flaw的分类)

1. Exceptional case/ (Hasty)Overgeneralization:

Take a small number of instances and treats those instances as if they support a broad, sweeping conclusion.

2. Time shift error:

The statistics from only a few recent years are not necessarily a good indicator of future trends

3. Errors of composition and division

…it can be shown that A1 is representative of all A.

我的问题是:

考试写argument时,需要分得较细一点, 还是就已”Insufficient”来定罪就可以了?

请大家帮助.谢谢!

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-7-30 0:07:55编辑过]

作者: happyfish0517 时间: 2005-7-30 07:59

看你有没有话写了...只要达到一定篇幅，粗分细分都是okay的...

七宗罪只是前人的经验总结...拿来参考可以，千万不要把它当顶礼膜拜一成不变的戒条

也许某天你自己可以创造出更适合自己的n宗罪...那对于你来说，那才是最好的！

作者: snowjing 时间: 2005-7-30 09:30
明白了,谢谢happyfish0517.

作者: vic711 时间: 2005-8-5 02:43
非常谢谢

作者: 投我以木瓜 时间: 2005-8-13 18:41

爽！谢谢咯！

作者: dreamstina 时间: 2005-8-21 18:57

ding

dingding

作者: 笙竹月梦 时间: 2005-8-31 12:21
今天入门第二日，知道了有个鼎鼎大名的东东—七宗罪。以前只知道是电影。

作者: happyfish0517 时间: 2005-8-31 13:31

以下是引用笙竹月梦在2005-8-31 12:21:00的发言：
今天入门第二日，知道了有个鼎鼎大名的东东—七宗罪。以前只知道是电影。

嘻嘻~常来！！

作者: 北极狐 时间: 2005-8-31 22:47

多谢多谢！

作者: rickyjiang 时间: 2005-9-17 23:00

my god!

作者: yuanlipinglily 时间: 2005-9-20 03:17
Top

作者: seraphblue 时间: 2005-9-23 06:01
衷心感谢!

作者: seraphblue 时间: 2005-9-23 06:02

七宗罪太强悍了～

作者: seraphblue 时间: 2005-9-23 06:26

thanks

作者: amy9301 时间: 2005-10-2 12:33

作者: TheYeti 时间: 2005-10-15 12:50
This is pretty neat stuff. Where is it reprinted from? I like to get to the source so I can use it at our "Workshop" http://www.rainlane.com/list.asp?boardid=8 (I try not to quote and requote but quote directly from the source with proper citation of name of author and source of information. Of course, that's not always possible. But if I can, I will.)

作者: peeeepy 时间: 2005-10-18 10:16
Just come here to say thank you. I used the emplate and got 6.0 in my test.I am not good at writing at all

作者: 山定子 时间: 2005-10-23 16:46

以下是引用TheYeti在2005-10-15 12:50:00的发言：
This is pretty neat stuff. Where is it reprinted from? I like to get to the source so I can use it at our "Workshop" http://www.rainlane.com/list.asp?boardid=8 (I try not to quote and requote but quote directly from the source with proper citation of name of author and source of information. Of course, that's not always possible. But if I can, I will.)

So far I have not the slightest idea of the source. I roughly put it into Chinese as its counterpart ( http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=18161&star=1#18161 ).

作者: seraphblue 时间: 2005-10-26 23:26
拜服

作者: jqt1983822 时间: 2005-10-27 16:22
哇，考个试长了好多见识，七宗罪，电影名字都用上了．我真是太土了．要多多想大家学习啊．

作者: hitlzc 时间: 2005-11-6 17:56
问个弱问题，此七宗罪是谁写的啊？

作者: maoliu 时间: 2005-11-24 11:32
哇,已经仰慕很久了,今天可终于见找了

作者: Joypan 时间: 2005-11-29 12:55

作者: babagjh 时间: 2005-12-3 06:33
支持，谢谢

作者: xjlv128 时间: 2006-1-2 22:47

久仰久仰！！一定仔细琢磨哈

作者: yangxuemei0111 时间: 2006-1-10 02:06
谢谢哦。。。。

作者: shelleyxing 时间: 2006-2-2 22:30
xcong

作者: nerissimo 时间: 2006-3-6 12:03

作者: cdsteven517 时间: 2006-3-22 10:38
支持

作者: cushwakeasia 时间: 2006-4-5 11:49

tks

作者: evangeline1122 时间: 2006-4-8 21:12

强！！赞！！！

THANK YOU！！

作者: greg 时间: 2006-4-10 15:02
感激!!

作者: springqi 时间: 2006-4-17 03:45
thanks for sharing

作者: Nolayang 时间: 2006-5-14 23:46
谢谢楼主！偶正开始学呢~

作者: yyzdy 时间: 2006-5-23 19:08

ganxie de hen

作者: sunsnow2418 时间: 2006-6-12 20:48
thanks............

作者: kathy301 时间: 2006-6-25 20:13
谢了

作者: 亚修 时间: 2006-6-26 08:55
3x.....................

作者: pumbaa 时间: 2006-7-9 11:35

要开始准备AWA了，非常感谢！！

ps. 第100楼哦！

作者: lena1114 时间: 2006-7-17 08:30
谢谢前辈!!!!终于找到 "七宗罪"了.

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