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作者: mumuwa    时间: 2004-7-30 18:47
标题: mumuwa GMAT阅读技巧示范篇——题目定位+逻辑简图
以下是引用携隐在2004-7-30 11:53:00的发言:

昨天做到南丁格尔那篇, 感觉好难啊, 虽然通篇读下来就知道说了些什么, 每段的内容, 但是后面的题目怎么都那么BT啊, 全部都是要想了又想的, 居然还是7道题! 我倒。结果错了4道,看后面暴长的解释看的我头痛死了,迟迟都没法睡着。

其实不难,因为OG没在身边,我刚才专门下载了RC,找出这篇给你做个示范,怎么看,看什么,怎么找,找什么:

1)Two recent publications offer different assessment of the career of the famous British nurse Florence Nightingale.(主题句,由此句和三段首句可知本文是结论解释型文章,即主要特点是总分式)A book by Anne Summers (观点之一)seeks to debunk (负评价的实义动词)the idealizations and present a reality(正评价词)at odds with Nightingale’s heroic reputation. According to Summers, Nightingale’s importance during the Crimean War(和观点二比较的差别点) has been exaggerated(负评价的实义动词): not until near the war’s end did she become supervisor of the female nurses. Additionally, (递进副词,表示行文方向一致,因此后面内容可以略读,仅提炼关键词即可,或不读)Summers writes that the contribution of the nurses to the relief of the wounded was at best marginal. The prevailing problems of military medicine were caused by army organizaitonal pratices, and the addition of a few nurses to the medical staff could be no more than symbolic. Nightingale’s place in the national pantheon, Summers asserts, is lrgely due to the propagandistic efforts of contemporary newspaper reporters.(以上略读)


2)By contrast(重要的强转折词,注意对比方/观点的差异点), the editors (对比观点二)of a new volume of Nightingale’s letters view Nightingale as a person who significantly influenced(正评价词) not only her own age but also subsequenct generations. They highlight her ongoing efforts to reform sanitary conditions after the war观点二比较的差别点,和观点一中during the Crimean War对比,这一句是后面举例的总结句,重要,知道总结句可以不用看后面的例子。). For example,举例通常可以略读,只提取例子中的关键词,如peacetime living conditions,举例的关键看前后的总结句,这里是for example 前面的一句话,因为例子都是用来说明总结句的,只要明白总结句的意思就行了。 ) when she leanred that peacetime living conditions in British barracks were so horrible that the death rate of enlisted men far exeeded that of neighboring civilian populations, she succeeded in persuading the government to establish a Royal Commission on the Health of the Army. She used sums raised through public contributions to found a nurses’ traning hospital in London. Even in administrative matters, the editors assert, her practical intelligence was formidable: as recently as 1947 the British Army’s medical services were still using the cost-accounting system she had devised in the 1860’s.(以上略读)

3)I believe that the evidence of her letters supports(正评价词) continued respect for Nightingale’s brilliance and creativity(正评价词). (总结句后举例说明,提取关键字,略读)When counseling a village schoolmaster to encourage children to use their faculties of observation, she sounds like a modern educator. Her insistence on classifying the problems of the needy in order to devise appropriate treatments is similar to the approach of modern social workers.(以上略读) In sum(文章最后一句话通常要仔细读,此处为总结句), although 让步略读,重点是让步后的转折句)Nightingale may not have achieved all of her goals during the Crimean War, her breadth of vision and ability to realize ambitious projects have earned(正评价词) her an eminent(正评价词) place among the ranks of social pioneers.(重点读,表明作者对以上两个不同观点的评述)

3)I believe that the evidence of her letters supports(正评价词) continued respect for Nightingale’s brilliance and creativity(正评价词). (总结句后举例说明,提取关键字,略读)When counseling a village schoolmaster to encourage children to use their faculties of observation, she sounds like a modern educator. Her insistence on classifying the problems of the needy in order to devise appropriate treatments is similar to the approach of modern social workers.(以上略读) In sum(文章最后一句话通常要仔细读,此处为总结句), although 让步略读,重点是让步后的转折句)Nightingale may not have achieved all of her goals during the Crimean War, her breadth of vision and ability to realize ambitious projects have earned(正评价词) her an eminent(正评价词) place among the ranks of social pioneers.(重点读,表明作者对以上两个不同观点的评述)

 

3)I believe that the evidence of her letters supports(正评价词) continued respect for Nightingale’s brilliance and creativity(正评价词). (总结句后举例说明,提取关键字,略读)When counseling a village schoolmaster to encourage children to use their faculties of observation, she sounds like a modern educator. Her insistence on classifying the problems of the needy in order to devise appropriate treatments is similar to the approach of modern social workers.(以上略读) In sum(文章最后一句话通常要仔细读,此处为总结句), although 让步略读,重点是让步后的转折句)Nightingale may not have achieved all of her goals during the Crimean War, her breadth of vision and ability to realize ambitious projects have earned(正评价词) her an eminent(正评价词) place among the ranks of social pioneers.(重点读,表明作者对以上两个不同观点的评述)


题目:

注意我怎么定位的,题干、选项和原文原句的对应线索我用相同颜色标注,题干中的定位依据的关键词我用下划线标注

73. The passage is primarily concerned with evaluating

(A) the importance of Florence Nightingale’s innovations in the field of nursing
(B) contrasting approaches to the writing of historical biography
(C) contradictory accounts of Florence Nightingale’s historical significance
(D) the quality of health care in nineteenth-century England
(E) the effect of the Crimean War on developments in the field of health care
主题题,直接定位首段首句主题句:Two recent publications offer different assessment of the career of the famous British nurse Florence Nightingale


74. According to the passage, the editors(定位在观点二出现段) of Nightingale’s letters credit(正评价的实义动词,将定位进一步限制在观点二中的正评价处,即找贡献) her with contributing to which of the following?


(A) Improving of the survival rate for soldiers in British Army hospitals during the Crimean War(时间状语为观点一的内容,观点二的比较点在after the war,大胆排除)

(B) The development of a nurses’ training curriculum (原文未出现,排除)that was far in advance of its day
(C) The increase in the number of women doctors (原文未出现,排除)practicing in British Army hospitals
(D) Establishment of the first极端词文章没有,选项出现,排除!)facility for traiing nurses at a major British university
(E) The creation of an organization for monitoring the peacetime living conditions of British soldiers


原文对应:she succeeded in persuading the government to establish a Royal Commission on the Health of the Army.
直接事实题,定位在2)段,for example 后具体内容中,此题重点在于对于文中未出现的信息的果断排除,千万不要超出文章半步的猜测。

75. The passage suggests which of the following about Nightingale’s relationship with the British public(定位在二段举例中,观点一或其他段落未谈到) of her day?
(A) She was highly respected, her projects receiving popular and governmental support.
(B) She encountered resistance both from the army establishment and the general public.
(C) She was supported by the working classes and opposed by the wealthier classes.
(D) She was supported by the military establishment but had to fight the governmental bureaucracy.
(E) After intially being received with enthusiams, she was quickly forgotten.

She used sums raised through public contributions to found a nurses’ traning hospital in London.  原文中唯一有public这个词的句子只有一处,确定无疑。

76. The passage suggests which of the following about sanitary conditions in Britain after the Crimean War(重要的定位依据,说明是观点二的内容,所以我以前说,对题干的提炼一定要注意,即使只是一个时间状语)?
(A) While not ideal, they were superior to those in other parts of the world.
(B) Compared with conditions before the war, they had deteriorated.
(C) They were more advanced in rural areas than in the urban centers.
(D) They were worse in military camps than in the neighboring civilian populations.
(E) They were unifromaly crude and unsatisfactory throughout England.

(They highlight her ongoing efforts to reform sanitary conditions after the war. For example, )when she leanred that peacetime living conditions in British barracks were so horrible that the death rate of enlisted men far exeeded that of neighboring civilian populations,....


77. Which  of the following statements regarding the differing interpretations of Nightingale’s importance would the author most likely agree(定位于作者的观点,作者观点的总结句,而不是文中提到的两个观点)?

(A) Summers misunderstood both the importance of Nightingale’s achievements during the Crimean War and her subsequent influence on British policy.
(B) The editors of Nightingale’s letters made some valid points about her practical achievements, but they still exaggerated her influence on subsequent genrations.
(C) Although Summers’ account of Nightingale’s role in the Crimean War may be accurate, she ignored evidence of Nightingales’ subsequent achievement that suggests that her reputation as an eminent social reformer is welldeserved.


定位于文末最后一句,关于作者对两个观点的总结句:


In sum, although Nightingale may not have achieved all of her goals during the Crimean War(观点一内容), her breadth of vision and ability to realize ambitious projects have earned her an eminent place among the ranks of social pioneers.

(D) The editors of Nightingale’s letters mistakenly propagated the outdated idealization of Nightingale that only impedes attempts to arrive at a balance assessment of her true role.

(E) The evidence of Nightingale’s letters supports Summers’ conclusions both about Nightingale’s activities and about her influence.

78. Which of the following is an assumption underlying the author’s assessment of Nightingale’s creativity(定位关键词,三段首句中,所以读原文注意评价词!)?

(A) Educational philosophy in Nightingale’s day did not normally emphasize developing children’s ability to observe.

When counseling a village schoolmaster to encourage children to use their faculties of observation, she sounds like a modern educator.

(B) Nightingale was the first to notice the poor living conditions in British military barracks in peacetime.

(C) No educator before Nightingale had thought to enlist the help of village shcoolmasters in introducing new teaching techniques.

(D) Until Nightingale began her work, there was no concept of organized help for the needy in nineteenth-century Britain.

(E) The British Army’s medical services had no cost-accounting system until Nightingale devised one in the 1860’s.

本题注意细节的排除,坚决按照原文信息!原文未出现的信息坚决不能选!尤其注意极端词汇!(以上选项中划线部分都是排除的依据)

79. In the last paragraph(直接定位), the author is primarily concerned with

(A) summarizing the arguments about Nightingale presented in the first two paragraphs

(B) refuting the view of Nightingale’s career presented in the preceding pargraph
(C) analyzing the weaknesses of the evidence presented elsewhere in the passage
(D) citing evidence to support a view of Nightingale’s career

(E) correcting a factual error occurring in one of the works under review

段落作用题,需要建立在框架把握的基础上,第三段和前两段的关系如何?从首句或末句判断。


I believe that the evidence of her letters supports continued respect for Nightingale’s brilliance and creativity.


以上的答案是我刚做的,如果有不对的,请MM给我指出来.

按照XDF老师传授的方法,第一遍读完,我会做这样的总结(XDF老师叫做"逻辑简图",携隐看看,其实简单的框架图就好,不用花太多时间像你以前那样总结.)

逻辑简图

1) 对N贡献评价有两个不同观点+第一个观点: TS(主题句), AS (Anne Summers), during the Crimean War, exaggerated ( — )

2)第二个观点:By contrast, Editors, significantly influenced(+), after the war, for examples

3)作者的观点:I believe....supports(+)...  brilliance and creativity(+). In sum,eminent(+)

这种逻辑简图简单实用,其实就是总结每段的段意段内标志文章承转起合的重要的连接词、态度词,帮助你了解文章框架,把握重要的由连接词引出的出题点。

另:从本文你可以看出,一定要培养对关键的连词作者态度词的重视和敏感!

我平常的阅读大致如此,是按照XDF老师的方法,每一遍的总结侧重不同,但最后读文章答题时就是这样的读法和思路,等于现场做一个示范,帮助大家了解我所说的读文章框架+定位+题干和原文的对应是怎么一回事.其他文章一个道理,希望能够拿上面的分析好好过一过,如果对你们的阅读有所帮助,也不枉我一片苦心啊~

如果这么做下来,大家还觉得阅读难,那mumuJJ可黔驴技穷拉~


[此贴子已经被作者于2005-4-26 18:28:01编辑过]

作者: 蓝夕叶子    时间: 2005-4-21 09:14

这个就是造福千万CDer的木木逻辑简图,总算在阅读区出现了.


cheers!~


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作者: 芙蓉菜菜    时间: 2005-4-21 10:44

已经在回复的帖子中看过了,不过还是要顶!!

思路很清晰,我们要好好学习。感谢木木JJ


作者: beautywawa    时间: 2005-4-21 17:47
嚴重的頂!
作者: winsx2008    时间: 2005-4-21 21:28
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作者: ring_cheng    时间: 2005-4-22 21:44
造福无数!
作者: mumuwa    时间: 2005-4-26 18:41

thanks for all the kind words.

I am back to work, and have to work hard all day and all night to catch up for what i missed in the past year. so forgive me, buddies, once i feel much easier about my job, i will surely rejoin your guys here.


作者: leslie123456789    时间: 2005-4-26 20:23

对于75题

"(定位在二段举例中,观点一或其他段落未谈到)",mumu jj,请问你是如何确定的?第一段和其他段落中有些东西被略读了,万一是第一段略读中提到过的呢?


作者: 蓝夕叶子    时间: 2005-4-27 17:07
mumu姐姐,加油!!!!
作者: swlfx    时间: 2005-6-24 15:46
今天再读,再次谢谢MUMU.
作者: 流淌的月光    时间: 2005-7-23 23:24
收录了~慢慢看
作者: ellycj    时间: 2005-9-8 15:19
thx, bravo!
作者: howcoolya    时间: 2005-9-8 18:22
大胆问一下,如何在机考的时候做笔记?您对这么多正负态度的词语,不回全部脑子记下吧?非常感谢您对我们这些很不成器的虾米人物提供了这么好的参考材料,多谢了,mumuwa
作者: psycheyaoyao    时间: 2005-9-15 16:21

感谢 感谢


作者: shaoheli    时间: 2005-9-15 20:47
好东东,收藏!谢谢!
作者: luora001    时间: 2005-9-17 23:13
非常感谢,正在为如何提高阅读速度和准确率烦恼呢
作者: janetzhj    时间: 2005-9-26 09:08
万分感谢!mumujj,你简直是造福四方。
作者: Flora_woo    时间: 2005-9-26 09:28
令人不禁仰视,多了一个崇拜偶像
作者: elaine3683    时间: 2005-10-6 21:08

真的是详尽啊,读过第二遍更加觉得思路清晰很多,多谢mumujj


作者: langbaobao1031    时间: 2006-1-1 19:20
呵呵,再次看!真的非常经典,ETS的经典套路。当年GRE的时候就是感受这种套路。谢谢了!
作者: willhunting    时间: 2006-1-4 04:35

真是精闢的解說


感謝分想


作者: 笨猫先跑    时间: 2006-1-10 19:44

受益匪浅


多谢多谢


以后会经常看看以防丢掉阅读感觉的


作者: dancerme814    时间: 2006-1-26 23:30

很有感觉 谢谢JJ



作者: zhiyuan    时间: 2006-2-8 08:05
感谢啊,分析的真透澈。
作者: angela84    时间: 2006-2-11 21:48

叹为观止.


thank you mumu!


作者: hitlzc    时间: 2006-2-12 00:12
强烈推荐!
作者: baobaob    时间: 2006-2-14 12:10
真是厉害!
作者: 我行我歌    时间: 2006-2-16 02:02
好不容易找到,得顶出来让大家看啊!
作者: cissie0128    时间: 2006-2-21 14:32

狂顶!!!超级感谢,不过小妹有同样的问题,考试是不能做笔记,这些框架难不成要在脑子里面


作者: shibing83809    时间: 2006-3-7 05:54
感谢,我一定会试试的!我会加油的!
作者: LQMM    时间: 2006-3-7 06:36
我也想问,在应付机考时,怎么做笔记呢?
作者: iris555999    时间: 2006-3-17 22:54

Thanks a million!


作者: monabluestone    时间: 2006-3-19 16:23

谢谢mumu姐姐的精彩刨晰!!up!


作者: fannyyudan    时间: 2006-3-20 13:57

是挺清楚,要训练到很快能画出图还真需要水平的


所以,通常我都是从头看到尾,培养自己的记忆力,正确率也挺高,就是比较浪费时间


作者: xjlv128    时间: 2006-3-20 15:01
以下是引用fannyyudan在2006-3-20 13:57:00的发言:

是挺清楚,要训练到很快能画出图还真需要水平的


所以,通常我都是从头看到尾,培养自己的记忆力,正确率也挺高,就是比较浪费时间


我也是!可是觉得有必要改变一下试试……


作者: iris555999    时间: 2006-4-3 10:23
标题: 还没有考,不过,
我想是在考场发的稿纸上做笔记吧。
作者: imyh    时间: 2006-4-4 17:59
狂顶!
作者: 二狼神    时间: 2006-4-9 12:19

我平常的阅读大致如此,读文章答题时就是这样的读法和思路
精辟!请教mumuJJ用这种方式时有没有定下一个大概的阅读时间:要在多长时间内看完原文又达到了JJ的效果才是比较合适的程度?看见有的说法是要在3分钟内看完长文,一分钟内看完短文,才算正常速度,这个说法JJ以为怎么样?然后做题时大概要多长时间完成一题为宜?问题较多,见笑!
作者: greg    时间: 2006-4-11 15:54

获益良多!!


作者: judy_chengyan    时间: 2006-5-10 17:47
感谢!
作者: xiaodouzi1025    时间: 2006-5-16 16:23

正在RC摸索中,

看到MUMU的事例分析和逻辑简图,真好!

顶!


作者: Nolayang    时间: 2006-5-25 10:38

thanks a lot!


作者: cw_chan    时间: 2006-5-25 15:06

老夫顶一下.


作者: chenda8201    时间: 2006-6-6 10:48

刚认真研习了,受益良多!!!^_^

thanks a lot!!!


作者: wshfnrdhm    时间: 2006-6-7 15:50

读了两遍了,好象还是不得概念,看样子还是功夫没下到,再仔细研究一下, 也许能够有大的提高。I HOPE SO!

 

 

 


作者: peachball    时间: 2006-9-6 11:13

看了3遍,前辈真是牛啊,我也上了XDF,确没有这么深刻的体会


作者: bell0421    时间: 2006-9-14 02:03
LZ辛苦了
作者: 无比    时间: 2006-9-14 17:58
顶啊~~~~~
作者: ll_422    时间: 2006-9-20 08:28

我上XDF唯一觉得有效的就是阅读老师让我们每篇文章都做逻辑简图和亮点总结, 的确是非常之有效. 看文章最主要的还是要把握思路. 而不是细节, 尤其是现在RC部分细节题目越来越少的情况下, 文章架构就突显其重要性了.


作者: vivipao    时间: 2006-9-30 11:46

惟有心中感谢


作者: goldmachille    时间: 2006-10-3 11:04

这样的确好啊!!!

机考应该有草稿纸可以做笔记把!


作者: mbz    时间: 2006-10-8 09:45
以下是引用芙蓉菜菜在2005-4-21 10:44:00的发言:

已经在回复的帖子中看过了,不过还是要顶!!

思路很清晰,我们要好好学习。感谢木木JJ

agree! ding again!


作者: jsj_gill    时间: 2006-10-8 18:06

谢谢楼主,很有用的方法


作者: facade    时间: 2006-11-10 02:25
正在苦恼阅读时就看到了楼主的文章,很受启发!谢了
作者: daijiabj    时间: 2006-11-10 16:52
ding ding
作者: CareWu    时间: 2006-12-18 14:53

什么时候我也可以这样驾轻就熟地阅读呢……


作者: magico    时间: 2006-12-18 15:59

非常非常的感谢~~


作者: amandaqin    时间: 2006-12-29 22:52

终于受到启发了,开始总结


作者: carp    时间: 2007-1-12 12:40
五体投地!!原来自己都是瞎读啊
作者: FLGeneral    时间: 2007-2-6 09:13
ding
作者: melody0828    时间: 2007-2-7 02:26

thanks for your explaination

by the way, can you give us another expmple??

i think the way is useful


作者: cojazzh    时间: 2007-2-12 11:29
thanks, so nice of u

作者: muyulinyan    时间: 2007-2-12 19:42

谢谢LZ,最近一直在为RC郁闷呢,好方法值得参考


作者: hru    时间: 2007-2-12 21:24
Good job!
作者: qiyuxingyuan    时间: 2007-2-14 00:59

好棒!


作者: 啼血的梦    时间: 2007-2-21 10:06
感谢木木JJ
作者: pangpangshin    时间: 2007-2-24 15:06
严重支持 太N了
作者: jason_jufe    时间: 2007-3-1 10:14

顶就一个字。


作者: phoenixfr    时间: 2007-3-1 15:11
受益非浅
作者: janebee    时间: 2007-3-25 07:44

Terrific. I am going to start with your methods prior to any practices.


作者: hru    时间: 2007-3-27 10:14
thanks a lot.
作者: mattus    时间: 2007-3-31 16:45
我发现类比,转折,列举,主题句都是出题点,但是看了这片文章之后我感觉自己的阅读重点需要转变一下,多放框架,少放细节
作者: raikey    时间: 2007-4-6 14:29
顶一下
作者: roderick86    时间: 2007-4-6 16:10
谢谢了 我花了半个多小时 好好地读了一下 感觉很受用 比起自己埋着头猛做 还是要结合牛人们的经验总结阿 呵呵 再次谢过!!!
作者: 我爱人民币    时间: 2007-4-7 22:40
真是幸运啊。花了一个多月的时间才研读完杨鹏难句,准备明天正式开始做RC的。现在看到了LZ super牛的东东,怎一个顶字了得啊!考完了请LZ嗨一顿!
作者: windjoy    时间: 2007-4-9 23:04
豁然开朗…… 多谢MUMU 以后经常过来看看!
作者: qiuzhen28    时间: 2007-4-12 15:25

作者: qqort    时间: 2007-4-24 00:25

谢谢木木!!


作者: wind_flower    时间: 2007-5-1 11:22
听过XDF老师讲这篇文章,看了MM的分析,觉得差距好大。自己怎么就没那么清楚。谢过木木。还是自己要多加油啊!
作者: doudoulovely    时间: 2007-6-17 18:36


作者: macyliu    时间: 2007-6-18 09:08
万分敬佩!反复研读!谢谢
作者: michaelt    时间: 2007-6-24 17:55

真是一篇不错的分析

感谢木木前辈了


作者: sunwenq    时间: 2007-7-20 07:27

谢谢,弄下来慢慢看!


作者: allendonal    时间: 2007-7-24 16:50

thanks, thanks, helpful


作者: hyk_79cn    时间: 2007-7-25 20:43
受益匪浅
作者: Schnellv    时间: 2007-7-25 22:33
拜读,once more
作者: 吴羽若    时间: 2007-7-27 15:31

激动中啊~

楼主太伟大了


作者: 吴羽若    时间: 2007-7-27 16:15

好好学习啊~~~~~~


作者: dmprince    时间: 2007-7-30 19:36
简直觉得是超级好心人,超级顶
作者: 1986chongyan    时间: 2007-8-16 14:52

作者: michael78    时间: 2007-8-19 00:37

finally find it, very helpful!


作者: jingoist2006    时间: 2007-9-6 01:21
太感动了,谢谢阿
作者: huangian    时间: 2007-9-6 11:12

太牛了!!!!施主出手 普渡眾生 頂啊!!


作者: ejbchang    时间: 2007-9-8 00:47
really a good material.
作者: feynman烨    时间: 2007-10-22 21:15

thax a lot!

有个不情之请:麻烦mumu jj或者斑竹把1楼的字体调大点儿行不?字小看这很累说~因为mumujj标记了颜色,放到文档里也不大方便看~


作者: xiaolon    时间: 2007-10-27 14:46
thx
作者: allenhzkk    时间: 2007-10-28 02:37
看了lz的图图,感觉就是白活了这么多年啊。。。。。
作者: zhuzhiyu2007    时间: 2007-11-1 10:44
这个要顶
作者: fionazhyf    时间: 2007-11-1 11:57

非常受用,赞一下!


作者: meivan    时间: 2007-11-5 05:37
豁然开朗  感激不尽





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