baby姐,你是对的。每篇文章的写法都不完全一样,这个是我用自己认为最简单的思路写完了之后随手翻了一页找的例文,只能说这段话的写法类似,不是一模一样,因为它没有加总结句(也就是我说的观点2)。更接近的可能是p400页的。
一般一篇文章也不会连说两个观点,而是一个背景,一个观点之类的。但是因为这帖子主要目的不是讨论这个,我就全用观点概括了。望见谅~
uu,“ OG13 第380页第一段话” 我找到的是下面这段(对应OG13题目31-36),不过我没读出有“观点2”,麻烦帮我看看。 Current feminist theory, in validating women's own stories of their experience, has encouraged scholars of women's history to view the use of women's oral narratives as the methodology, next to the use of women's written autobiography, that brings historians closest to the "reality" of women's lives. Such narratives, unlike most standard histories, represent experience from the perspective of women, affirm the importance of women's contributions, and furnish present-day women with historical continuity that is essential to their identity, individually and collectively. 我的总结是这样的: 观点1 (current ♀ theory): ♀'s oral = method bring Hist closest to real of ♀论证1 ♀'s oral ( ≠ most std hist) 1, 2,& 3(我没找到“观点2”...)
如果一段话这么写:观点1……例子……观点2。作者的意图是什么?肯定是支持观点1,观点2和观点1一定是同一战线上的,只不过是对观点1所作的延伸。我是怎么知道作者的这个意图的呢?因为作者用了例子这个手法。在观点1和观点2之间,举个例子作为观点1的支撑,并作为把观点1和观点2联系起来的桥梁。(类似写法:OG13 第380页第一段话)-- by 会员 evysy (2012/7/1 6:15:24)
-- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/7/1 7:53:44)
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