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[issue] issue13 第一次写,求拍!!

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发表于 2013-3-20 08:06:14 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
13Universities should require every student to take a variety ofcourses outside the student's field of study.
Write a responsein which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the mostcompelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge yourposition.
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Should universities require every student to take avariety of courses outside the student’s field of study, as the speaker claims? I agreewith the author’s view, takes a variety courses outside their field of studywill help students long-term development. But if enforce student study outside of their field, it will harmful totheir freedom to choice course and education’s essence.

From academic point of view, students studyoutside of their field is helpful to draw on experience and method from otherdisciplines. As society development, interdisciplinary research becomes moreimportant than before.  Many subjects canlearn from each other, improving technology development.  Moreover, disciplines are becoming more andmore refined, but solving problems should use different knowledge and method.  

From personal life point of view, studyoutside of student’s field will help they learn more information and becomeintegrated talent.  First of all,students will find their true interest.  Fore instance, if a student major in science and he don’t understand art, when hechoose to learn music or painting, he can enjoy the pleasure he neverexperienced.  It’s makes their life nomore boring and understand how to relax themselves to avoid over fatigue.  In addition, they will make morefriends make life more exciting.

Although there so many advantage, thestatement is too absolute.  Universitycan’t request student must take a variety courses outside the student’s fieldof study.  Students have the right tochoose education.  Education should bepeople-oriented, to the interest of students and cultivated student’s potentialas a core.  If university requirestudents must does that, it is harmfully to students development.  Because education is expensive, not everystudent can afford it , it will increase the economic burden of students.  Besides, the path to acquire knowledge is notthe only.  Students don’t have to take courseat class.  Classroom teaching has flaws,it require students must at a fixed time and fixed place to study.  It’ s not flexible.  Except this study method, we can also access knowledgeat library, internet.  There is no needto take classroom teaching as single way, because students right will bedeprived.

To sum up, takes a variety courses outsidetheir field of study will help students long-term development. Also, universitycan take variety course for students to choose. If students want to broaden their horizons, they have way to accessinformation. It fit education’s essence: education essence is fair.  In this way, it can’t damage students’self-esteem whose economic situation is not good
写的第一篇,求指导
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发表于 2013-3-20 09:17:31 | 只看该作者
写的挺好的,作者知道怎么写issue。结构可以组织组织,读读满分作文。
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-3-20 16:52:52 | 只看该作者
好的好的^_^我去研究研究,谢谢普渡哥
就是还想问问开头是不是都可以用疑问句,有没有什么样的题不能用
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