IBT第一篇作文(已改第一遍,请德克及大家使劲拍）

 考 G 的时候作文完全考模板，自己几乎没有好好写过。这次IBT看来是逃不过了，憋了半天写了一篇，请大家使劲拍。万分感谢！！！

Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computer have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.

   What does the computer effect to our life? Although there are lots of people say that computer have made more stressful and complex, i still regard the computer as a great tool that improves our life quality eariser and convenient.

   To begin with, computer has become a essentially important tool that can help people to deal with the work easier. For example, a accountant has to calculate all the numbers of the salary report of a corporation by abacus and pen. It probably need spend over several months to finish a report for a small company that only five employees worked for. With the computer's help, a modern accountant can finish the salary report for a company within one thousand employees in a hour. The computer greatly reduces the workload for the specialists.
 
   Furthermore, computer helps people communicate and get information more convenient. Even though the telephone and telegraph can help people act some simply communication in the past days, it is still very difficult and expensive for people to exchange the complicated information. The internet, which is the network built up based on computer, improve the communication status a lot. People can easily chat with friends in the other side of the earth by MSN, can easily get tons of information what they need about the panda, and can share the ideas and emotions with people wherever they live to the World Cup Soccer game. Computer and internet make the world smaller and closer.

  Admittedly, the computer also makes life more complex and stressful in some condition. People have to deal with more works at the same limited time than ever before.The more and more trade and business build up on the computers and internets, the bigger risk if there are any problem in the computer happened. The preventation of computer collapse makes thing more complex. However, compared to the convenient from the usage of computer, the difficulty and stress came from computer's wide application are much more smaller.

  In conclusion, although the computer also brings some complex tasks and more stress to the usiers, more benefits that computer brings to human beings make our life more colorful, convenient, and easily. Moreover, the developing computer technology will help us to make lifer more easier and minimize the disadvantages in the near future.

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   Currently, computer has become more and more popular all around theworld. What does a computer effect our life? Although there are lots of people say that computer has made more stressful and complex, I still regard computer as a great tool that improves our life quality quite well.

   To begin with, computer has become an essential tool that helps people deal with the work easier. Before computer invented, an accountant has to spend several days on finalizing the payroll for a five-workers’ company. With a computer help, an accountant can finish the same report for a modern several thousand employees’ company within an hour. Computer greatly reduces workload and speeds up working process.
 
   Furthermore, computer helps us get information and communicate each other more conveniently. The internet totally converts the information gathering and communication style. An American student can on time chat with Russian friends by MSN, get tons of information about the panda status in Chinese zoo last night, and share happiness with Italian soccer fans for Italy Nation team earned the World Cup. Computer makes the world communication closely and tightly.

  Indubitably, computer also makes life more complex and stressful at some aspects. People have to handle more works within limited time than ever before. The more trade and business on the computers and internets, the higher risk relates if any problem cause computer system collapse. However, compared to the convenient, the difficulty and stress from computer application are much smaller.

  In conclusion, although computer is not perfect, it brings to us a more colorful, convenient, and easy life. Moreover, the developing computer technology will minimize the disadvantages in the near future.