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36. Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives.

• automobiles

• bicycles

• airplanes

Compared to the modern vehicles such as planes and bicycles, automobiles dominate the world’s transport not only in the wildness of use but also in the using number. As a result, since they were born in the USA, automobiles have dramatically changed people’s lives, for their wild use, unsafe factors, and the pollutant they draw out every second.

Obviously, it is truth that the utilization of the automobile actually brings us a whole new world, in which each of us feels so efficient and convenience. Our food, for example, are far from those our grandmas have, both in the varieties and the freshness. Now we could eat the delicious fish transported by automobiles from the other hemisphere of the earth, which even those early emperors can’t enjoy before they existed.

However, equal to favorable usage, their disadvantages also aren’t overlooked, which is just the unsafe factors during driving. So far, it is reported that the death caused by traffic accidents has been rising to be the first dead percentage, beyond the smoking and cancer. For those unqualified drivers, the express velocity is a two-side sword, which not only threat the passengers and other drivers, but themselves lives. Undergoing the traffic accidents is a really dreadfully experience, I wish every driver could recognize their significant responsibilities, and avoid the occurrencese of the tragedy.

Moreover, the inevitable factor is the pollution generated through the flaming of the gasoline during the using of the automobiles, which is also the most profound influence both on present and in the future. My hometown Beijng, for instance, has started to conserve our clear fresh air from being polluted for ten years, and it began with a excellent arrangement. Nevertheless, the quality of the air in recent years, hovers in a low lever, just for the increasing number of the private automobiles, which draw out myriads pollutant that is hard to be controlled by the government.