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楼主
发表于 2004-10-8 04:10:00 | 只看该作者

TWE 122, 望不吝赐教.

What is the most important animal in your country?


The issue at hand is which animal is the most important one in our country. Upon this question, different
people hold distinctive views due to their respective standpoints and backgrounds. Some prefer dragon,
claiming it is the symbol of Chinese. However, as far as I am concerned, I assert that the giant panda, the
endangered species in the world, is the famous animal in China and in the world in terms of following discussions.


To begin with, giant panda is one of the most important species in the world. Because the current number
of giant panda is only about five hundred, it is on the verge of extinction. Furthermore, giant pandas are also
called "living fossil" since they have lived in this planet for ten thousand years. Studying their skeleton, DNA,
and tissues can help scientists figure out the ancestors of such species. According to the new study, giant
panda and polar bear have the same ancestor. It is very interested subject for scientists to work out why
these very different two animals are the offsping of the same ancestor living in totally different circumstance.


Moreover, giant pandas are the friendship symbol in the world as well. As we know, since giant pandas are
the unique species in China, the visitors in the rest of the world have to come to China to visit them. After
80's, however, China government has sent about 30 giant pandas to other nations. The most important one
in the United States is "Hua Mei", which means "China and America". He spent about 10 years in Washington
zoo and attracted more than millions of Americans to see him. After visting him, many kids and adults become
his fan. As a result, the cultural and scientific exchange between China and America contributes significantly to
the relationship between two countries. Also, because of American advanced genetic technology, the United
States has help China foster more pandas than ever before.


In sum, taking into account above mentioned reasons, which are adequate and persuasive, we can arrive
at the conclusion that giant pandas are not only the critical species to be researched, but also the friendship
diplomacy ambassador. Because its unique position in the world, we should cooperate to save this endagered
animals as possible as we can.



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沙发
发表于 2004-10-8 23:04:00 | 只看该作者
这篇文章俺一直不敢写, 觉得很难找到合适的题材, 楼主写的俺明天再看吧, 报谦.
板凳
发表于 2004-10-9 00:12:00 | 只看该作者

tough topic, neither do I.


[此贴子已经被作者于2004-10-9 0:14:31编辑过]
地板
发表于 2004-10-9 23:42:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用seinfeld0923在2004-10-8 4:10:00的发言:

What is the most important animal in your country?


The issue at hand is which animal is the most important one in our country. Upon this question, different
people hold distinctive views due to their respective standpoints and backgrounds. Some prefer dragon,
claiming it is the symbol of Chinese 最好加一个others would like to choose.... However, as far as I am concerned, I assert that the giant panda, the
endangered species in the world, is the famous animal in China and in the world in terms of following discussions.


To begin with, giant panda is one of the most important species in the world. Because the current number
of giant panda is only about five hundred, it is on the verge of extinction. Furthermore, giant pandas are also
called "living fossil" since they have lived in this planet for ten thousand years. Studying their skeleton, DNA,
and tissues can help scientists figure out the their ancestors of such species. According to the 特指不明确, 改成a new study, giant
panda and polar bear have the same ancestor. It is 少个限定词吧 very interested subject for scientists to work out why
these very different two animals (species)are the offsping of the same ancestor living in totally different circumstance.


Moreover, giant pandas are the friendship symbol in the world as well. As we know, since giant pandas are
the unique species in China, the visitors in (from)the rest of the world (other countries)have 时态好像有点问题to come to China to visit them. After
80's, however, China government has sent about 30 giant pandas to other nations. The most important one
in the United States is "Hua Mei", which means "China and America". He spent about 10 years in Washington
zoo and attracted more than millions of Americans to see him. After visting him, many kids and adults become
his fan. As a result, the cultural and scientific exchange between China and America contributes significantly to
the relationship between two countries. Also, because of American advanced genetic technology, the United
States has help China foster 用这个词合适吗?more pandas than ever before.


In sum, taking into account above mentioned reasons, which are adequate and persuasive, we can arrive
at the conclusion that giant pandas are not only the critical species to be researched, but also the friendship
diplomacy ambassador. Because its unique position in the world, we should cooperate to save this endagered
animals as possible as we can.

似乎还可加一个观点: 由于熊猫是endangered species, 可以呼唤人们的保护生态环境的意识.



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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-10 09:31:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢PENGSTONE的指点, 我修改过了. 但FOSTER的用法我查了一下, 应该可以用作"抚育"的意思, 不知道对不对. 还有, 我打字较慢, 本文快400字了, 实在不敢写第三个理由段了. ANYWAY, 得到高手的评点是一件很愉快的事情.


The issue at hand is which animal is the most important one in our country. Upon this question, different
people hold distinctive views based on their respective standpoints and backgrounds. Some prefer dragon,
claiming it is the symbol of Chinese; others choose phoenix, asserting it represents the spirit of Chinese.
However, as far as I am concerned, I insist that the giant panda, the endangered species in the world, is
the most important animal in China as well as in the world in terms of following discussions.


To begin with, giant panda is one of the most valuable species in the world. Because the current number
of giant panda is only about five hundred, it is on the verge of extinction. Furthermore, giant pandas are also
called "living fossil" since they have lived in this planet for ten thousand years. Studying their skeleton, DNA,
and tissues can help scientists figure out their ancestors. According to a new study, giant panda and polar
bear have the same ancestor. It is a very intriguing subject for scientists to work out why these very different
two species living in totally different circumstance are the offsping of the same ancestor.


Moreover, giant pandas are the friendship symbol in the world as well. As we know, since giant pandas are
the unique species in China, the visitors from other nations have to come to China to visit them. After
80's, however, Chinese government has sent about 30 giant pandas to other nations. The most famous one
in the United States is "Hua Mei", which means "China and America". He spent about 10 years in Washington
Zoo and attracted more than millions of Americans to see him. After visting him, many kids and adults became
his fan. As a result, the cultural and scientific exchange between China and America contributes significantly to
the relationship between two countries. Also, because of American advanced genetic technology, the United
States wild-animal research agency has helped the Chinese counterpart foster more pandas than ever before.


In sum, taking into account above mentioned reasons, which are adequate and persuasive, we can arrive
at the conclusion that giant pandas are not only the critical species to be researched, but also the diplomatic
friendship ambassador . Because of its unique position in the world, we should cooperate to save this endangered
animal as possible as we can.



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