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发表于 2004-8-17 02:44:00 | 只看该作者

TWE011麻烦大家帮我看看!!!谢谢!!

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University should give the same amount of money to their students sports activity as they give to their libraries.



Noways , some may hold the opinion that university should not give the same amount of money to their students sports activity as they give it to their university libraries. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I can concern, I agree that universities should give the same amount of money to their sports activity and libraries. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide my idea.




Like everybody knows, sports can make our body health. People can become more energy than before. Doing sports fit to the different of  age’s people. Take my grandfather for example. He is sixty years old but he can ride a bicycle by himself and he can go ski .How can you imagine a very old man can do that. He can do some sports that cannot do as an old man.




Obviously sports can lead young people get more energy. , After doing sport, they can become stronger than before. They can either concentrate to their study or get a healthier body. For instance, one of my friends is a guy who cannot take a eighty pounds staples. After did sports for one month, he can take a eighty pounds thing. That’s why I announce doing sports is good.




Moreover, people can get a good sleep by doing sports. After people do sports, they will feel tired in the evening, so they can fall sleep very soon. Like me, I can sleep in fine minutes at night if I play basketball in the daytime


All and all, I think doing sports can bring a lot of benefits. We can get a healthy body by doing sports and we can become energetic. The last thing is that we can get a really good sleep after doing sports. So in my viewpoint, I think universities should give the same money to both sports activity and libraries.
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发表于 2004-8-17 03:32:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用lea0832在2004-8-17 2:44:00的发言:

TWE011.


University should give the same amount of money to their students sports activity as they give to their libraries.






Noways(Nowadays) , some may hold the opinion that university(universities) should not give the same amount of money to their students(students') sports activity(activities) as they give (-it) to their university libraries. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I (-can) concern, I agree that universities should give the same amount of money to their sports activity(activities) (-and+as) libraries. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide my idea(ideas).









Like everybody knows, sports can make our body health(healthy)(-.+so) People (-can+may) become more energy than before. Doing sports fit (-to) the different of  age’s people(??). Take my grandfather for example. He is sixty years old but he can ride a bicycle by himself and he can go ski (He can not only go cycling but also go skiing as well).(What a staggering fact that such an old person still can do these it is)How can you imagine a very old man can do that. He can do some sports that cannot (-do+be done) (-as+by) an (-old+young) man.(so many 'can' you use)








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