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People always differ on whether to study together. Some people claim that studying alone give one more freedom and enjoy more privacy; others maintain that studying together is high efficient because members of the study group can help each other . But , in my opinion, I  consider studying alone more favorite than together, for studying alone helps to concentrate the subject easily and provide more space to soar the imagination free.

Firstly, when studying alone, one can escape distraction come from others, especially when busily engrossed in calculating numbers. Take my experience as an instance, when doing my homework on account, the numbers are so subtle are confusing, I must escape from the world to concentrate myself, unless I accept a inaccurate outcome willingly. So there is no doubt that with no distraction, the effectiveness of studying is apparent and the efficiency is high.

Secondly ,studying alone always avail one more space to structure one problems. If one eagerly want to produce a unusual work scheme, he or she must get rid of the dreary clichés.. Under this circumstance , the person must keep being calm but fiercely and spawning innovative ideas. Then staying alone without pet peeves is a better choice,  and studying alone is favorable.

Besides, studying alone help the person enjoy more privacy. One can study while listening to music , even doing whatever he or she like without incurring critics. This is can not produce when studying together.

Admittedly, studying together maybe give the member of the group some constructive advice such as how to interact with others, how to present a assignment, etc. But ,compared with the advantages of studying alone, this help is seemed  trivial.

In sum, according to the above-mentioned reasons ,sometimes which intertwine together to be more convincing, it is no difficult to reach a conclusion that studying alone can benefit one more than studying together.

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这段怎么回事？

去掉，或者加到前面去。

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还是,要,多看看,阅读的文章学习学习～

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Firstly, when studying alone, one can escape distraction come from others(people studing alone can escape from the distraction caused by others), especially when busily engrossed in calculating numbers. Take my experience as an instance(take--as an example,查了朗文，没有take--as an instance这个表达法), when(I am句子主语不是某人，不能用省略) doing my homework on account(你是不是想表达会计学作业的意思？会计学是accountancy，on account 是分期付款的意思;doing my accoutancy homework), the numbers are so subtle are confusing(and confused；怎么会有两个are 呢),(.)I must escape from the (rackety outside) world (so as) to concentrate (on) my homework, unless I (am willing to)accept a inaccurate outcome. So there is no doubt that with distraction, the effectiveness of studying is apparent(bounded) and the efficiency is high(去掉).

句型太单一；且when 和 escape from出现的太多～

表达口语话～

另外，

段落尽量集中～

In sum 都用了，怎么不是最后一段？看上去很不爽～

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谢谢诸位，我再改改！！

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感谢各位朋友的帮助，我综合大家的意见，改正了，如果有时间有兴趣，不妨再看一眼！！

peoples always differ on whether studying alone or studying together is helpful. some people like studying alone for it gives more freedom ; others maintain that studying in a group is efficient because acting on advice of other members one can go further. As far as I am concerned, I consider studying alone preferable, studying alone providing one more space to concenrate on the problem , to enjoy privacy , and to soar the imagination without distraction.

fist of all, while studying alone, escepially busily engrossed in some works such as accountant or auditing , one can escape interruption which comes from others.my own experience can serve as an good example. when I do my assignment, I hate any fuss which distracts me from my job. And without any fuss, the outcome is usually statisfied. Therefore, there is no doubt that studying alone is  efficient  to solve problems.

At the same time , studying alone often avails one more quiet space to soar his or her imagination . To produce an unusal work scheme, he or she must get rid of the dreary cliches and spawn innovative ideas ,  then studying alone can definitely be the first choice .

besides, studying alone enable one to enjoy more privacy. one , who studys alone, can do whatever he or she prefer to do;he can listen to music and watch television while studying. Even one can ,without annoying anyone,stay up .

admittedly, studying together maybe gives the member of the study group some help such as how to interact with others, or how to present an assignment effectively. but , compared with the advantages of studying alone, this help seems to be trivial.

to sum up, according to the above-mentioned reasons, it is obvious that studying alone can benefit one more than studying together, for one can study without disturbance, soar imagination freely and enjoy more privacy.

问个白痴问题，如果我这篇的观点是既需要单独的时间自己学习，又需要大家在一起讨论式的学习，算不算走题呢？选择性的题目一定要立场鲜明，只能两者选一，不能综合一起讲吗？？？

如果水平高，能自圆其说，我觉得写作并无定规。你最好杳查bryony,pengstone的意见、文章，参考参考！！