我3月15日写的6分作文（TWE177）

Whether purchasing a car or going on a vacation with big money, recently the topic has been brought into focus in my circle of friends because one of my friends obtained big money from a game he took. There are a few friends who think purchasing a car is a better choice while the others prefer going on a vacation. In my personal point of view, I would probably choose the former. In the following discussion I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important than this one that purchasing a car can bring much convenience. Undeniable facts witness and present many examples as below: First, if you own a car, you can go to work every day by driving without wasting time on the way to bus or metro station. Second, you can take a short trip any time during the weekend if you want to do it. The third, not the last, you can do some shopping in some places where you can’t reach by public transportation before. Don’t you think that the examples mentioned above are so persuasive?

That a car is a worthy thing is another chief and key reason that I choose to put here. It is no better illustration that can prove the standpoint that purchasing a car is a better choice than going on a vacation. A worthy thing means that it can be changed for money again. If one day you do not need a car, you can choose to sell it to others and then you can get money back. So, you can take a vacation with the money in the future. I believe, if you see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Of course, to some extent, going on a vacation also has its own distinct merits such as visiting a famous place that you have not been to, relaxing yourself, and learning something different from your hometown and so on. But if all factors are contemplated, nevertheless, the advantages of purchasing a car carry more weight than those of going on a vacation. So the most outstanding conclusion is very apparent.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, which sometimes intertwines to form an organic whole and thus becomes more convincing, we can safely draw the conclusion that purchasing a car is a better choice than going on a vacation with unexpected money. As a matter of fact, not only do I prefer purchasing a car, but also prefer purchasing such a worthy thing as a car or an apartment as possible as you can if you obtain big money abruptly.

楼上的问题我不知道答案。不过同样的魔板，不同的内容（twe111），还包括考试时可能出现的一些小错误，ets给打了5分。

第一、第二和第三个分论点都好象在说一件事情呢？就是有车方便！

不过30分钟要写这么多字，真的不容易！恭喜你，干的不错！

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I have been realizing that life is full of choices. We have to learn to give up something to obtain better benefits. Just as stated in the title, when the limited amount of money can be spent either on a wonderful trip or a car that someone can use for a long time, different people may make different choices. Of course, both choices have their advantages. Generally speaking, if I were asked to decide between going to a vacation and buying a car, I will choose the later. I do not actually need a car right now but I feel a car can bring much more benefits to people. The reasons are listed as follows.

The first thought about having a car is how it can make our lives different. Admittedly, to maintain a car in good condition costs money. However, we can benefit tremendously from using a car. We do not have to wait for a bus which may fail to come forever in a harsh winter day. We can move out to a better apartment away from downtown because a car enables going to work on time. When our friends need a drive, if we are willing to help, they can always be our guests. Needless to say, a car can change our life in multiple ways.

While it is foolish to ignore the fact that going to vacation lets us see what we have not seen and experience what we have not experienced, just as how I started, we have to learn to give up. Can we go to vacation later? I think so. Can we travel by driving a car? Sure. I think there is much more fun. You must have heard how people drive their cars traveling across the states. Traveling like this is more economic. Since we only have such amount of money available, I will suggest we postpone the luxurious vacation plan and improve our living quality, from right now.

In conclusion, we can safely choose the wiser thing to do now. The advantages of getting yourself a car definitely outweigh those of going to a vacation. Trust me, you are making the right decision for your life if you invest the money in buying a car.