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A26. “Individual comfort and security will be greatly increased when electronic surveillance cameras are continuously operating in all public areas.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
1电子监控设备的使用确实可以在很大程度上使人们更有安全感。公寓里面的监视器保障了居民的安全；商场里的监视器可以遏制偷窃；ATM上的监视器可以让我们不再担心有人盗用我们的mastercard
2但是监视器似乎没有让我们更舒适而是相反地变得比较不适。想象一下自己在公共场合的一举一动都被记录在案相信每个人都会或多或少变的比较拘束。
3此外我们要警惕电子监视器侵犯我们的隐私。因为公共场合这种概念很难界定。象是宾馆了饭店这一类的地方到底是不是应该安监视器一直以来都是众说纷纭。经常有明星或者是普通人在里面的录象被传媒暴光引发不必要的麻烦。

1.To some extents, electronic surveillance cameras comfort and benifit the public. For example, in many bank, some electronic surveillance facilities are apllied to control and trace what happen everyday, a lot of authorization use it as a way to prevent criminal issue.

2.But this cameras should be located in a proper place.Only this facility does not intrude people private life could it be accepted by the publlic. For example, some cammeras are positioned in a private place of some hotel to trace the customer's behavior.That is totally refused...(i don't know whether it is good to cite this in AWA)

huhu，一口气想了好几篇，有点累了，大家想想啊

谢谢oookk，辛苦了。给你发个小红花.

楼上例子-For example, some cammeras are positioned in a private place of some hotel to trace the customer's behavior.That is totally refused...(i don't know whether it is good to cite this in AWA)

个人认为不是很好，因为题目中明确-all public areas，not 'the private place',

倾向于1楼的说法

补充一点：what the electronic surveillance cameras recorded should be properly kept,should not access to the intentional violation of people's privacy.