这已经是正确表达. Scientists have observed large concentrations of heavy-mental deposites in the upper twenty centimeters of sediments from the Baltic Sea,findings consistent with the growth of industrial activity in the area. 我想知道这里的findings...是前面整个句子的同位语嘛?如果是的话,有关这种同位语结构:一个名词概括前面一整句话的语法知识可以在哪里查到,我想再好好学一学,有点忘了.