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og-170 对于平行结构的疑惑!

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楼主
发表于 2005-3-1 16:12:00 | 只看该作者

og-170 对于平行结构的疑惑!

Although early soap operas were first aired on evening radio in the 1920's, they had moved to the daytime hours of the 1930's when the evening schedule became crowded with comedians and variety shows.



(A)  were first aired on evening radio in the 1920's, they had moved to the daytime hours of the 1930's



(B)   were first aired on evening radio in the 1920's, they were moved to the daytime hours in the 1930's



(C)  were aired first on evening radio in the 1920's, moving to the daytime hours in the 1930's



(D)  were aired first in the evening on 1920's radio, they moved to the daytime hours of the 1930's



(E)   aired on evening radio first in the 1920's, they were moved to the 1930's in the daytime hours


og说除了a,其他都违背了平行结构,可是为什么although引导的从句会算是平行啊?


不理解,请教大家!谢谢!

沙发
发表于 2005-3-1 17:34:00 | 只看该作者

这题不是选B么??

板凳
发表于 2005-3-1 19:39:00 | 只看该作者
是B啊
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-1 22:50:00 | 只看该作者
不好意思,写错了,是选b,og说其他的break parallelism,although引导的从句也要平行吗?
5#
发表于 2005-3-1 23:48:00 | 只看该作者
感觉平行什么地方都适用,有平行的比不平行好
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-1 23:49:00 | 只看该作者
楼上的说法相当笼统,有没有大概范围?
7#
 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-2 18:39:00 | 只看该作者
自己顶!
8#
发表于 2005-3-2 19:03:00 | 只看该作者

Choice B is the best answer. It maintains the passive voice and the past tense (were ... aired) established in the introductory clause. Choice D breaks this parallelism by shifting from passive to active voice (moved). Choice A also uses the active voice and inappropriately shifts to the past perfect tense (had moved); the past perfect should be used to indicate action completed before, not after, the action of were aired. In C, moving introduces a dangling participial phrase in place of an independent clause, thus producing a fragment. E drops were before aired and finishes the sentence with two prepositional phrases that distort the meaning.

AD从逻辑上来讲是有问题的,也是不平行的,既然operas 能自己move to the daytime,为啥他不能自己air呢?A的时态也有问题!C缺少主句,而且现在分词moving to the daytime hours in the 1930's放在中间,造成dangling modifer,不知道修饰谁,他的逻辑主语可能是soap operas,也可能是evening schedule。E从逻辑上来讲范了AD的错误,而且无端更改强调性词汇first的位置,改变愿意!

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发表于 2005-3-2 19:08:00 | 只看该作者

The point  is not "although."

The points are " in the 19xx's".

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-2 22:38:00 | 只看该作者
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