天山 4 -4

Q4:
Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and
landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the
first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life
and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who
became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the
peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in
1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in
1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about
the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in
1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909
becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

我选了a ，答案为d。 a在这里属于什么错误类型呢？ 分词修饰？ 1909修饰语位置不对？还是was 应该为become 但是这又是什么错误类型呢？？？

這有人討論過,,參考看看

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=23&ID=84507&page=1

我觉得A最大的错误是 who became the first woman and (who) was also the first Swedish writer to win

逻辑不通. (她变成了第一个女人)而且(她成为第一个瑞典作家赢得).

而D, Selma Lagerlöf became (in1909) the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

可以一起看, (她变成第一个女性并且是第一个瑞典作家)赢得

A得1909..我覺得也有問題,,,

不曉得之前還之後..

与3楼的观点不谋而合，并做一下修改：

而D, Selma Lagerlöf became (in1909) （the first woman and also the first Swedish）writer to win...可以一起看：她成为（第一个女性且是第一个瑞典)作家赢得...

括号部分是修饰语。

另外in 1909的位置的确有问题。

I think the right answer is E.

A,C,D all have a common mistake: turned/turning away from literary realism to write romatic stories... Here, the from ... to ... reqires two parallel nouns. Whereas E changed the structure to turned away from ... and wrote ..., completes the parallel of two verbs, and is more close to the logical meaning. This parallel of two verbs also make the sentence more balanced. Although B also adopts this correct structure, the "She..., and novelist Selma" creates redundancy of the subjects. Thus, only E is the best answer.

我开始做时也有同感,并以此迅速排除A,C,D,结果发现B和E的and wrote在语意和逻辑上也不好.只好重新找错.做完后分析才发现,这里to并不与from平行,而是turn away sth to do sth. 用to表示了turn away后的方向,比B和E中的and wrote好.

E不但改变了句子重心,而且在逻辑上有明显错误:SL成为第一个获奖的女作家和瑞典作家 是由于 她turned away...and wrote....-----That doesn't make sense.  turned away...是辅助说明SL是怎样的一个作家,重心在获奖那一句.

E还有一错:that不可指代writer,要用who的.注意B也一样哦!

答案是D.

E 不对在于 the + 序数词　后应该接　to do 而不是that,

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