请问og135题 c选项

og解释说：The placement of now is awkward in C,为什么awkward?

135. Intar, the oldest Hispanic theater company in New York, has moved away from the Spanish classics and now it draws on the works both of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of those in the United States.

(A)  now it draws on the works both of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of

(B)  now draws on the works of contemporary Hispanic authors, both those who live abroad and those who live

(C)  it draws on the works of contemporary Hispanic authors now, both those living abroad and who live

(D)  draws now on the works both of contemporary Hispanic authors living abroad and who are

(E)  draws on the works now of both contemporary Hispanic authors living abroad and those

In choices A and C, it intrudes between the halves of the compound verb has moved... and [now] draws to introduce a new grammatical subject, thereby creating a run-on sentence:the inclusion of it requires a comma after classics to set off the new independent clause (以此类推，and 连接并列句，如果第二句中出现主语的话，则and前一定要有逗号隔开). The placement of now is awkward in C（状语位置导致笨拙）, and the construction living abroad... and who is not parallel in C and D. Misplacement of words creates ambiguity in E: for example, the positioning of both immediately before the phrase describing the authors suggests that there are only two contemporary Hispanic authors living abroad (E从并列的角度去讲也不是很好). The logical word placement and parallel phrasing of B, the best choice, resolve such confusions.

Both 在E中出现的歧义还是要非常小心，因为both…and…本身就是一个经常考的词组。Now的位置在B中也是最好，最清晰的。

同时代的西班牙作家生活在海外的和生活在美国的，这个从语法上我是知道并列的，可是生活在美国难道不也是生活在海外吗，不是重复了吗？？？？？怎么想也想不通。求助。。。。

对于A选项也不明白，Intar, the oldest Hispanic theater company in New York, has moved away from the Spanish classics and now it draws on the works both
     of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of those in
     the United States.    我觉得这个both---and ---词组平行的很好啊，为什么A不对呢？？

等待NN解惑，谢谢。

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平行的不好,关键是who live abroad和those in the U.S.不平行

先谢一下。只是愚钝还是没想通呢，

一个是句意，烦请解释一下，我觉得这肯定是个简单的问题，因为都没见大家讨论过这个歧义，一定是我想错了，但是我不知道我错在哪里了。同时代的西班牙作家生活在海外的和生活在美国的，这个从语法上我是知道并列的，可是生活在美国难道不也是生活在海外吗，不是重复了吗？？？？？怎么想也想不通。求助。。。。

二这个平行，

对于A选项也不明白，Intar, the oldest Hispanic theater company in New York, has moved away from the Spanish classics and now it draws on the works both    of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of those in
     the United States.    我觉得这个both---and ---词组平行的很好啊，为什么A不对呢？？

对于A选项也不明白，Intar, the oldest Hispanic theater company in New York, has moved away from the Spanish classics and now it draws on the works both    of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of those in
     the United States.    我觉得这个both---and ---词组平行的很好啊，为什么A不对呢？？

those指代contemporary Hispanic authors ，

那么both    of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of those in     the United States. 

黄色的两个部分我觉得对称的很是完美啊。怎么我就是想不会呢，？？？？？？？？？？？？？

yhq110:这题我一下就明白了，

第一个我的问题错在我一直以为除了自已祖国的之外的就是海外，看来小时候的我又红又专了。

第二个我的问题我错在眼界太窄，只看到两个of的形式上是如此相像，但是我没有看到后面一个是从句，一个是词组，并且这个答案本身就不是最优的。