Citing the recent increase in earnings by several computer companies, economists feel that a cycle has begun in which personal computer users, especially corporate consumers, are replacing their PC's with more powerful models.
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which refers to "cycle".在从句中作状语,in the cycle ..users...are replaceing their PCs...
in which 从句避免头重脚轻,所以滞后。
e逻辑意思错!人是一个周期的开始!
What's more, the pronoun "they" does not have a clear antecedent. 指代经济学家还是个人电脑用户,但这点我也不是很肯定,,,
Open to discuss
in which可以用that来代替一下,因为从句太长,因此将动词提前。in which指代cycle
E:personal computer users are in the beginning of a cycle when they。
1.in the beginning of ?应该是at
2.cycle不能理解,什么cycle,是时间?事件?还是命运。后面直接结了when引导的时间状语从句,整句顺序错误,且意思不明确。
那么b有什么错误吗?
A. a cycle has begun in which personal computer users
B. a cycle for personal computer users has begun in which they
我觉得在A中,后面的their 很明显是指代 PC.users的,而在b中用they 代替了,可能会造成指代不清的问题,有可能指代economists,是不是这样?
b的主谓语分开了,arkward
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