Duke 3rd Essay

hi, Duke 2006,

    I'm working on Duke essay. The third topic(attached below) really gives me a headache.Here is the way i arrange my answer:  

the core values of my current employer(MNC) are similiar to that of Fuqua---my understanding of these core values through work experience(3 real case)--how can I add on to Team Fuqua

do you think i answered the question?how can i improve it? Thanks a lot!

"Team Fuqua" is a frequently used term when discussing the Duke MBA program. Great teams have great leaders with great ideas and great team play. Thus, "Team Fuqua" means much more than teamwork. In fact, it builds directly from the core values of Fuqua, which are collaboration, innovation, and leadership. Please describe what you would bring to build on these core values and make Team Fuqua great.