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I do not think a person's dress can indicate of his or her personality or character. There have(are) many other determination factors such as career and age to help know a person. After some deep conversations, we can know what they(这个最接近conversations,会造成指代错误) like to do in their spare time and what kind of habits they have. Then, we can combine many factors together to make a conclusion, otherwise, we would misjudge a person's character, or blind by their(跟前面的不对应) outside such as their dress.
Some places such as school or workplace(这个就中式英语了,这些物不会主动发出asks,应该把主要换成人) asks people dress unity(tidely), therefore, their clothes cannot indicate their personality. In my high school, every student was asked to dress the school uniform, some girl may wear(时态不一致了) some colorful hats or fashion shoes to different(这个不是不定式) from other students, but their shoes, hat, or T-shirt cannot(时态) represent their character. In another way, some high pay(paid) workers such as bankers or strategy consultants, all of them dress business suit such as black or gray(这两个是颜色,不能当suit用), which(which不能指代前面的一整句话) is not only company's policy but also is a respect(respect很少用这种方法,换show respect) to the client. Those bankers would(时态前后又不一致了) dress very casual(这个是形容词,换介词) in their spare time, or some other bankers still dress very tasteful(同casual错误), how can you know what kind of personality they are! I need dress business suit every working day, but I would never dress them(前后单复数不一致) at weekend, because every time when(可省去) I dress up I just feel lost some freedom and casualty, the well dress person is not really I(real me). In another way, A wife may in charge of husband's and children's clothes, this means people's dress sometimes means other's people's taste.
Again, some people who work at the factory, (加连词)they need to dress some cloths good work(中式英语了). Meantime, they would(我不懂为什么要用过去将来时) dress some t-shirt or jacket in their spare time because they are used to casual clothes. However, we don't know what will they do in their spare time. They might like go to surfing on the wave ( it means they like sports) or they like hiking ( this means they like nature and excises ) or they just don't pay attention to their clothes at all, because they are work-class, they may don't have enough budget(用money) to buy fancy and hand-made clothes. Some soldiers need to dress uniform every day, therefore, uniform cannot represent a person's personality.
Although, we would say some movie stars who dress very shiny and colorful such as Lady Ga Ga, she is famous for her outstanding and surprise dress. Many people would say she is very open-minded and like trying new things. From some point, her dress is a good advertisement selling point to catch public's attention, which will bring her more exposure and a good advertisement paycheck. Other public people such as a president of an international company, he/she has private dress consultant, because him/her dress represents company's public image. Therefore, we would be blind by some people's dress.
In one words, we cannot tell people's personality who dress business suits at work time, it may be just a respect to the client, they probably dress very casual in their spare time. Moreover, some famous people's dress sometime represents company's image, so we cannot tell their personality, too.
实在不想打击LZ 你的语法有很严重的问题 尤其是时态问题 导致后面半篇我几乎没有耐心看完了 还有中式英语很严重 很多词语都是被你直接翻译过来的 人家老美又不一定懂 在语法上先多下功夫吧 文章逻辑也有点模糊 上升空间还有很大 |
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