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ioioke

Tpo 18
The reading passage states that Torreya started to die out and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that all the three method will unlikely to succeed and refutes each of the author’s reasons.

First, the reading claims that one option is to reestablish Torreya in the same location. The professor refutes this point by saying that Torreya need a specific microclimate. She states that Torreya will not grow in the same location since the global warming and dryer climate. This is the first reason to contract the passage.

Second, the article points that move Torreya to an entirely different location. However, the professor says that will have potential dangerous. According to the professor, it has opportunity for Torreya to spread very fast and kill other kinds of trees. She refutes the point of the passage since the result is unpredictable.

Third, the reading says that preserve Torreya in research centers. The professor opposes this point by explain that research centers do not have enough spaces for a big population of  Torreya to keep its diverse. Meanwhile, research centers cannot protect the species and conducts research on Torreya.

ioioke

多发了一次。。。

sarahpx

The reading passage states that Torreya started to die out and provides three reasons of support.（个人感觉support这个说法太笼统了，最好直接说是protect） However, the professor explains that all the three method will unlikely to succeed and refutes each of the author’s reasons.

First, the reading claims that one option is to reestablish Torreya in the same location. The professor refutes this point by saying that Torreya need a specific microclimate. She states that Torreya will not grow in the same location since the global warming and dryer/ierclimate（wetland）. （亲，好像这里global warming不是原来那个microclimate 不适宜的原因，主要原因是整个环境drier， 而global warming 和 drier wetland 造成了整个环境drier）This is the first reason to contract the passage.

Second, the article points(out) that move Torreya to an entirely different location. However, the professor says(用了好多次了，可换换argue，indicate） that will have potential dangerous（danger ，have danger/be dangerous）. According to the professor, it has opportunity for Torreya to spread very fast and kill other kinds of trees. She refutes the point of the passage since the result is unpredictable.

Third, the reading says that preserve Torreya in research centers（that 后面接从句亲）. The professor opposes this point by explain that research centers do not have enough spaces for（额，这个听力里没说吧，不确定的亲别往上写了啊，到时候扣分挺严重的） a big population of  Torreya to keep its diverse（这个表达挺好的，由此我发现这段我自己表述有些问题）. Meanwhile, research centers cannot protect the species and conducts research（这个也是听力里没提的吧） on Torreya.

ioioke

多谢亲的批改，收获很多，最后一点应该是diversity，名词。

The reading passage states that Torreya started to die out and provides three reasons of support.（个人感觉support这个说法太笼统了，最好直接说是protect） However, the professor explains that all the three method will unlikely to succeed and refutes each of the author’s reasons.

First, the reading claims that one option is to reestablish Torreya in the same location. The professor refutes this point by saying that Torreya need a specific microclimate. She states that Torreya will not grow in the same location since the global warming and dryer/ierclimate（wetland）. （亲，好像这里global warming不是原来那个microclimate 不适宜的原因，主要原因是整个环境drier， 而global warming 和 drier wetland 造成了整个环境drier）This is the first reason to contract the passage.

Second, the article points(out) that move Torreya to an entirely different location. However, the professor says(用了好多次了，可换换argue，indicate） that will have potential dangerous（danger ，have danger/be dangerous）. According to the professor, it has opportunity for Torreya to spread very fast and kill other kinds of trees. She refutes the point of the passage since the result is unpredictable.

Third, the reading says that preserve Torreya in research centers（that 后面接从句亲）. The professor opposes this point by explain that research centers do not have enough spaces for（额，这个听力里没说吧，不确定的亲别往上写了啊，到时候扣分挺严重的） a big population of  Torreya to keep its diverse（这个表达挺好的，由此我发现这段我自己表述有些问题）. Meanwhile, research centers cannot protect the species and conducts research（这个也是听力里没提的吧） on Torreya.

-- by 会员 sarahpx (2012/9/14 9:52:07)

ioioke

9月14
Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in the
past?



Education is always one of the most important topics in the world. Some people think people are easier to become educated in the past. However, I do not agree with this. I believe people are now easier to become educated, since we have more resources, higher quality teachers to help us, and people now desire to be educated.



First of all, a lot of ways could help people to become knowledgeable. For example, most families have their own computers which could access to internet. People could surf on internet to get what kind of information they need. At the same time, more and more libraries were built in past decades. It is convenient for people to borrow books and get information. So people could become educated more easily than before.



Second, more and more high quality teachers attend to school. Nowadays, lots of people want to be a teacher because teachers do not need to worry about the security of their job. Schools never laid teacher off. One official survey shows, every position of teachers has average 100 candidates. So schools have a lot choice. Also, teachers are the most important factors in education systems. Good teachers know their fields very well, and could give students a lot of details. Students are able to get interesting in their subjects. Good teachers could give more fun to students to study. For instants, lots of students do not want to learn numbers. When I was in primary school, one of teachers used different kinds of candy to show different numbers. Do you think children would forget those candy numbers?



Meanwhile, people are willing to study because the competition of our society. Everyone knows they have to have a high degree to get a better job. People are easier to become educated when they want to.



Base on the three points I stated, I think people now are easier to become educated.

9.14 TPO19





The article states that buzzing generated a lot of bad effects, and was threaten to be banned. The author provides three reasons to support his opinion. However, the professor explains that the passage is misleading and refutes each of the author's reasons.



First, the reading says that buzzers do not tell consumers they have been paid. The professor argues that it is wrong. He gives an example about the phone company he works with. He feels happy about this product and he wants to tell someone else about his experience. He tells consumers he was paid for telling them truth instead of lie, since he thinks the product is good. This is the first reason weaken by lecture.



Second, the passage claims that consumers trust what they heard from buzzers without think about it. However, the lecture argues that the professor always needs to answer a lot of questions about the phone service, such as the price.



Last but not least, the author presents that buzzers have harmful effect from their job on social relationships. In contradict, the professor opposes that people will more trust buzzers when consumers have good experience with the products that buzzers introduced to them.

小兔爱twins

Education is always one of the most important topics in the world. Some people think people are easier to become educated in the past. However, I do not agree with this. I believe people are now easier to become educated, since we have more resources, higher quality teachers to help us, and people now desire to be educated.（开头直白 ok！）



First of all, a lot of ways could help people to become knowledgeable. For example, most families have their own computers which could access to internet. People could surf on internet to get what kind of information they need. At the same time, more and more libraries were built in past decades. It is convenient for people to borrow books and get information. So people could become educated more easily than before.（观点正常 表述无碍 但是句型用词比较贫乏。。。 有待提高！）



Second, more and more =increasing number of   high quality=qualified  teachers attend to school. Nowadays, lots of people want to be a teacher because teachers do not need to worry about the security of their job. Schools never laid teacher off. One official survey shows, every position of teachers has average 100 candidates. So schools have a lot choice. Also, teachers are the most important factors in education systems. Good teachers know their fields very well, and could give students a lot of details. Students are able to get interesting in their subjects. Good teachers could give more fun to students to study. For instants, lots of students do not want to learn numbers. When I was in primary school, one of teachers used different kinds of candy to show different numbers. Do you think children would forget those candy numbers? （这段我觉得偏题了。。。。。。）



Meanwhile, people are willing to study because the competition of our society. Everyone knows they have to have a high degree to get a better job. People are easier to become educated when they want to.（这段可以展开说 ）



Base on the three points I stated, I think people now are easier to become educated.

小兔爱twins

Education is always one of the mostimportant topics in the world. Some people think people are easier to becomeeducated in the past. However, I do not agree with this. I believe people arenow easier to become educated, since we have more resources, higher qualityteachers to help us, and people now desire to be educated.（开头直白 ok！）



First of all, a lot of ways could help peopleto become knowledgeable. For example, most families have their own computerswhich could access to internet. People could surf on internet to get what kindof information they need. At the same time, more and more libraries were built in pastdecades. It is convenient for people to borrow books and get information. Sopeople could become educated more easily thanbefore.（观点正常 表述无碍 但是句型用词比较贫乏。。。 有待提高！）



Second, more and more =increasing number of   high quality=qualified teachers attend to school. Nowadays, lots of people want tobe a teacher because teachers do not need to worry about the security of their job. Schools never laid teacher off. One official survey shows, every position of teachers hasaverage 100 candidates. So schools have alot choice. Also, teachers are the most important factors in educationsystems. Good teachers know their fields very well,and could give students a lot of details. Students are able to get interestingin their subjects. Good teachers could give more fun tostudents to study. For instants, lots of students do not want to learn numbers.When I was in primary school, one of teachers used different kinds of candy toshow different numbers. Do you think children would forget those candy numbers? （这段我觉得偏题了。。。。。。）



Meanwhile, people are willing to study becausethe competition of our society. Everyone knowsthey have to have a high degree to get a better job. People are easier tobecome educated when they want to.（这段可以展开说 ）



Base on the three points I stated, I thinkpeople now are easier to become educated.