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 楼主| 发表于 2012-9-15 20:24:03 | 只看该作者
9月14日独立

Have you ever watched the American opera” gossip girl” via internet? Have you ever been encouraged to learn basketball even though you are a girl? Have you felt happiness and satisfied since you paid the tuition fee by your scholarship? If you have never had these experiences, you would not know how easy can we geteducation in today society due to the development of technology, assistance of government as well as the change of social attitude.

It is well known that technology has been advanced significantly since last century, which leads to great improvement in our education resources and means. Given the past, if students wanted to learn foreign language such as English, directly emulating the pronunciation of teacher is the only way in that there were no equipment for them to listen to English tapes and no foreign teachers to talk with. However, with the advent of internet and various electronic equipments, such as IPAD, MP4, students can easily gain access to a huge amount of English materials, which handily prepare them with the key knowledge they need in the future. it is impossible for us to emphasis the important of technology too much, when it comes to the quality and availability of education.

Apart from advanced technology, the assistance from society and government also play a crucial role in improvement of education. For those who had difficult being educated for the sake of finance problem, governmental authorities and colleges have provided various welfare programs to help them. With plenty of opportunities to acquired scholarship and subsidies, students are more likely to finish their education. In addition, the popularization of compulsory education offers more chances to those who are eager to received education but cannot affords the expensive tuition fees. It is the sound welfare system of government and some institution in today society guarantees the availability of schooling to more people than in the past.

Last but not least, change in attitude toward education, especially for women, considerable urges the education pervasion. This obviously reflected in the fact that the increasing number of female are active in the social stage. In the ancient of China, girls who wanted to get education were often regarded as traitorous. They were forbidden by their parents to touching any books so that most of they were not literate at all. Compared with them, women nowadays are able to attend school as well as man without gender discrimination from parents and society.

To sum up, I agree with the statement that people are now easier to become educated today than in the past because many aspects of our society have largely improved to relatively high level, which are more likely to satisfied the needs of people who seek the chance of education and self-enhancement.
32#
发表于 2012-9-15 21:35:00 | 只看该作者
Have you ever watched the American operagossip girlvia internet? (我觉得Gossip girl 电视剧用在这里不太合适呢,要不换成Modern Family 你觉得怎么样?要不网络课程也行~~个人意见呢,呵呵~)Have you ever been encouraged to learn basketball even though you are a girl? Have you felt happiness and satisfied since you paid the tuition fee by your scholarship? If you have never had these experiences, you would not know how easy can we get education in today society due to the development of technology, assistance of government as well as the change of social attitude.(楼主~其实我觉得这个开头结构用的人很多~~这样容易重复,小建议哈~~

It is well known that technology has been advanced significantly since last century, which leads to great improvement in our education resources and means. Given the past, if students wanted to learn foreign language such as English, directly emulating the pronunciation of teacher is the only way in that there were no equipment for them to listen to English tapes and no foreign teachers to talk with. However, with the advent of internet and various electronic equipments, such as IPAD, MP4, students can easily gain access to a huge amount of English materials, which handily prepare them with the key knowledge they need in the future. it is impossible for us to emphasis the important of technology too much, when it comes to the quality and availability of education.

Apart from advanced technology, the assistance from society and government also play a crucial role in improvement of education. For those who had difficultdifficulty being educated for the sake of finance problem, governmental authorities and colleges have provided various welfare programs to help them. With plenty of opportunities to acquired scholarship and subsidies, students are more likely to finish their education. In addition, the popularization of compulsory education offers more chances to those who are eager to received education but cannot affords the expensive tuition fees. It is the sound welfare system of government and some institution in today society guarantees the availability of schooling to more people than in the past.

Last but not least, change in attitude toward education, especially for women, considerable urges the education pervasion. This obviously reflected in the fact that the increasing number of female are active in the social stage. (我觉得在后面加一个和题目联系起来的句子会更扣题~~)In the ancient of China, girls who wanted to get education were often regarded as traitorous. They were forbidden by their parents to touching any books so that most of they were not literate at all. Compared with them, women nowadays are able to attend school as well as man without gender discrimination from parents and society.

To sum up, I agree with the statement that people are now easier to become educated today than in the past because many aspects of our society have largely improved to relatively high level, which are more likely to satisfied the needs of people who seek the chance of education and self-enhancement.


我觉得LZ的句子写得很好~观点也很不错,加油~~
33#
 楼主| 发表于 2012-9-16 19:31:58 | 只看该作者
9月15日独立
Whether university professors should focus on the education of students or researches? It might be tempting to back professors invest more time and energy in educating instead of researching. However, given to chance, I think the formula ought to be reversed. Granted, the students play a crucial role in future development of a nation. Still, researches in various spheres form the bases for a social rapid development.
First of all, Researches are of great important for our life. Countless scientific achievement, which has always accompanied with the progress and revolution of the society, definitely, relevant to a multitude of experimental researches conducting by professors and researchers. The invention of the stream engine brought a new era of prosperity of world society; the employment of electricity has multiplied the productivity and virtually reproduced limited resources on the earth. By the same token, the innovation of computer technology has made the Earth a little village and connected distant countries as a single Market. Apparently, we cannot emphasis the important of researcher too much.
Furthermore,
It is likewise that technology will exert more far-reaching effect on the mind of students. No matter whatever the result is, a processing of a research often accompanied with rapidly accumulation of cut-edging knowledge to the professor, which directly reflected in their teaching courses. When referring to a sort of concept or points associating with one of research, it is evitable that professor brings into their incisive opinions and advanced knowledge. Even though most are too profound to understand, it also plants a scientific seed in student mind, waiting to germinate one days.
Given the understanding , it is difficult to overratethe connection between research and education. Admittedly, it can not be ignore that schooling of students imparted by professor is one of the vital feature of social development. Nevertheless, in many cases, the accomplishments hail from scores of research conducted by professors could facilitate the schooling of university. For example, technology has offered students with easy access to academic databases via I pad screen. Read classical literature masterpieces or watch historical documents on internet. These great works are essentially helpful to arousing their curiosity and prepares them with key knowledge necessary for many courses. This kind of case is not rare. Thus, we can draw a conclusion that researches greatly benefit the education in college.

To sum up, the professor’s time should be occupied by a plenty of research. For these reasons mentioned above, it is incorrect to place education significant above that of researches
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发表于 2012-9-16 20:14:19 | 只看该作者

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发表于 2012-9-17 20:03:30 | 只看该作者
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