6.18 独立

qianjun06

The passage makes the point that several measures have been proposed to stop the spread of the cane toad in Australia. On the contrary, the lecture demonstrates the idea that these methods could not get rid of the cane toad.

To start with, contrary to the belief in the passage that the spread of the toad could be prevented by building a fence, the professor says that the fence could not stop the spread of toad, because the fence is not efficient. Eggs and young toads are able to get through the fence by the carrying water. Thus, the first reason provided in the reading is refuted.

In addition, the author holds the view that toads could be captured and destroyed by volunteers. In contrast, the lecturer contradicts the idea by saying that trapping the toads will not success and they will trap the native frog by mistakes, since it is difficult for them to tell the difference between toad and frogs especially the young toads. So, this directly cast doubt on its counterpart in the reading text.

Last but not least, the reading material states that virus could control the cane toad populations. On the other hand, the listening material presents a conflicting idea that it could make a disaster in the eco-system and they are also a part of the system. Since the toads will be transferred to the United states, the virus will kill the toad in it In the end. Therefore, the last point in the reading is totally unsound.

qianjun06

7月27日Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should know the events happening around the world, even if it unlikely has some influence on your daily life.

In recent years, there is public controversy that whether it is a need for people to acquire something irrelevant to their daily life. Those who criticize the notion argue that knowing everything will exhaust more precious time. However, other people are in favor of it. Contrary to the opinion of the former people is my heartfelt agreement with the idea that people should know the events, which has less influence on their daily life.

To start with, sharing the feelings about the current affairs may provide an opportunity for us to communicate with our friends and colleagues. There is no denying that the pace of our modern life so fast that we felt lonely and overwhelmed at such advancing rhythm. So, talking about the issue, even which has nothing to do with our daily life, will alleviate our pressure and makes us more energetic for another challenge. It provides a typical example of my own. I always talk about foreign politics which my father. Although it influences less on my life, I deem it's a excellent topic between us when we have nothing to talk about. Therefore, on no account can we ignore the value of the irrelated cases.

In addition, obtaining knowledge is a long process of accumulation. What we have learn may not be used immediately. So, we should prepare different kinds of ken for tomorrow' utilizing. Learning the events happening around the world also can broaden our view, which may correct our previous opinions of what is the norm in our society. For example, studying the manner of western-style food can help me better understand the culture of America life, and I can apply it when I go abroad. Therefore, we cannot emphasis the importance of uninfluenced matters too much.

When people deem it is favorable to be informed with outside world, isn't it necessary that they should give some consideration to the disadvantages it cause. Admittedly, learning about too many items will cost us numerous time, which may be used to more critical things, for instance, researches and traveling. Even worse, there irrelated issues will distract our attention from studying.

Considerable though the negative points that casting eyes on a wider range results in are, they cannot compete with the benefits that paying attention to the whole world brings about, when communication and knowledgeable brains are taken into consideration.

qianjun06

The passage makes the point that the number of birds in the United States will decline. On the contrary, the lecture demonstrates the idea that what the writer has said is not convinced.

To start with, contrary to the belief in the passage that birds' nature will disappear with the growing of human populations, the professor says that more cities provide habitats for the bird, which increase the number of birds. Also, more birds are found in the city. Although some species are facing extinct, other kinds of birds are increasing. Therefore, the first reason by the writing is refuted.

In addition, the author holds the view that agriculture will also result in the further destruction of the bird habitats. In contrast, the lecturer contradicts it by saying that the growth of the agriculture is not the way said in the reading. Actually, there is less land used for agriculture. Scientists also invent new technologies to make more productive products, which will save more lands. This directly cast doubt on its counterpart in the reading.

Last but not least, the reading material states that the use of pesticides will also increase. On the other hand, the listening material presents a conflicting idea that the tradition way has changed in two sides. First, people will use the new pesticides , which is less toxic. Second, they will grow the pesticideless products, which will not harm the birds any more. Thus, the final point in the reading is totally unsound.

klllun

TO qianjun06~
昨天的作业貌似是TPO18啊~那个17我还没有做的诶。自己先去写一次17再来修改哈~今天晚上确实来不及写作文啦。这里有一个自动检测的PDF结果，请先凑活着看看，明个儿我写了继续修改的啊~

kchszy061ban

蓝色为意见或建议高亮为精彩绿色为总结红色为错误

In recent years, there is （这里加个冠词？）public controversy that whether it is a need for people to acquire something irrelevant to their daily life. Those who criticize the notion argue that knowing everything will exhaust more precious time. However, other people are in favor of it. Contrary to the opinion of the former people is my heartfelt agreement with the idea that people should know the events, which has less influence on their daily life.

To start with, sharing the feelings about the current affairs may provide an opportunity for us to communicate with our friends and colleagues. There is no denying that the pace of our modern life （加个系动词）so fast that we felt lonely and overwhelmed at such advancing rhythm. So, talking about the issue, even which has nothing to do with our daily life, will alleviate our pressure and makes us more energetic for another challenge（感觉这里用other challenges比较好些额，another总感觉有下一个，有点类似的challenge的赶脚）. It provides a typical example of my own. I always talk about foreign politics which my father（木写完？）. Although it influences less on my life, I deem it's a excellent topic between us when we have nothing to talk about. Therefore, on no account can we ignore the value of the irrelated cases.

In addition, obtaining knowledge is a long process of accumulation. What we have learn may not be used immediately. So, we should prepare different kinds of ken for tomorrow' （这个加s）utilizing. Learning the events happening around the world also can broaden our view（outlook 或horizon都行）, which may correct our previous opinions of what is the norm in our society. For example, studying the manner of western-style food can help me better understand the culture of America life, and I can apply it when I go abroad. Therefore, we cannot emphasis the importance of uninfluenced matters too much.

When people deem it is favorable to be informed with outside world, isn't it necessary that they should give some consideration to the disadvantages it cause. （用问号？）Admittedly, learning about too many items will cost us numerous time, which may be used to more critical things, for instance, researches and traveling. Even worse, there irrelated issues will distract our attention from studying.

Considerable though the negative points that casting eyes on a wider range results in are, they cannot compete with the benefits that paying attention to the whole world brings about, when communication and knowledgeable brains are taken into consideration.

不错不错，句子和逻辑都很好，就是小处注意哈