叁贰玖坐稳~分数刚出来所以现在才发

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AA 从之前的寂静里翻出来的基本上一样“Eight years ago, our firm’s profits were increasing with each new employee we added. We discovered that each employee had the skills and motivation to generate more revenue for the firm than his or her salary cost us. However, for the past two years, our profit margin has been falling, even though we have continued to add employees. Thus, our newer employees are not generating enough revenue to justify their salaries. We must not be hiring new employees with the same level of skills and motivation as those we used to attract. Clearly, then, failures in the human resources department account for our falling profits.”

我写的是1.八年前和近两年不能相比
2. 影响利润的不只是员工的水平
3. 员工质量不能由人力资源部门负全责


AI Employees should keep their private lives and personal activities as separate as possible from the workplace

我写的是同意，原因有

1.不分开会影响自己的工作业绩，因为想着私事儿必然不能专心工作，再写举例

2.不分开会影响周围同事的工作状态，比如有人接电话，旁边的人会受影响

3.诚然不可能完全分开，必须尽力克服困难。



我的作文分数只有4.5，所以大家就看看就好，不合适的不必深究~~~