AWA: Management team: "One grocery's sales increased 20% after adding pharmacy section. Customer's main concern is one-stop shopping. Therefore, adding more service and new departments would bring more profits. Therefore, adding of more service and new department such as garden shop, restaurants will bring more profits."
Issue: "Everywhere, it seems that there are clear and positive signes that people are more respectful of one another's differences"
写作: 主要是看了一下所谓的七宗罪,还有一般的Issue写作,分好段,每段确定要说的话,30分钟还是够用的。驳论主要是论述1) oversimplication as no relationship between increased sales and profits, need more data or statistics to prove 2) the grautuitous assumption of management team about customer's main concern of one-stop shopping, as the base of adding more services/departments. 3) unwarranted assumption of adding more services brings more profits, may cause more costs and reduce profits instead of increasing profits. summary
Issue: 1) In one hand, clear signes with more respects of difference between people, with examples such as culture, entertainment, etc. 2) In another hand, blur signes as people become more hostile with each other, with examples of opinions on internet, etc.